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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These are good. Story line? We don\'t need to stinkin\' story line! (to paraphrase - lol!) Just keep chapters like this coming! (pardon the pun!).
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more. Demanding lot aren\'t we.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm *moans*
too horny to give constructive criticism
but its vegemite :P i luv it 4 breakfast!! and u can tell im true blue from that!
but i luv it so far
mmmm so hot!!
too horny to give constructive criticism
but its vegemite :P i luv it 4 breakfast!! and u can tell im true blue from that!
but i luv it so far
mmmm so hot!!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are wonderful! This is going on my favourites list!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My my. that was hott
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go on, spoil us, write another chapter! I read this and thought \'the next step might be for them both to be in a situation where they think they are day dreaming, to discover later they\'re not\'. Just an idea, if you think you could use it to get out another chapter, I\'d be extremely happy. I\'d be extremely happy with another chapter whatever.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snickers*
Tis has Potential..............*HLeers evilly*
Oh yeah! From one Aussie to another (Oi Oi Oi!)
I look forward to more
Evily yours
Darksoul~
Tis has Potential..............*HLeers evilly*
Oh yeah! From one Aussie to another (Oi Oi Oi!)
I look forward to more
Evily yours
Darksoul~
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Did I see this was a one shot? You have the beginnings of something interesting. Maybe another couple of chapters, with Snape having read her thought\'s and acting on them?