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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this is such a great start!!! I love the way you write the characters, it just seems so perfect. Please update soon!!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your sly narrative tone when you write about Draco. I like the fact that your plot is not readily apparent in these first two chapters... you\'ve been extremely brief about the backstory and Ron\'s betrayal, but the results are quite clear and rather devastating for Hermione. I\'ll be checking in on your story as you go.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
promising... very promising!
i love your characterization, and this is just a brilliant begining
i hope you update soon
lia
i love your characterization, and this is just a brilliant begining
i hope you update soon
lia
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!I love the way you write! It reminds me of what J.K Rowling would write. I cant wait to read the next chapters so please update soon!!!!!!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning so far. Please update soon, I\'m excited to see where you take this. :)