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for The Fall of Hermione

by HeatherLeigh

person Alauralen
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only had time to read the first capter and review, so I just wanted to let you know that your story rocks! I can\'t wait to read the second one and I hope that you post the next soon! What other website did you have it posted on?
person glaeken29
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
I\'m hooked.
I look forward to future chapters.
So far, just awesome.
thanks.
person HermioneSnapeLv
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHH!! this is Very Good! I hope you update soon!!! I really like how you\'ve developed Hermoine. The whole story is fasinating, and I hope you continue. I like how you switched Lestrange and Hermione\'s souls and I find the plot to be very engaging. Your writing style is very good. There where hardly any (if at all) grammer errors-which is rather rare-, and the sentense structure really flowed and made the whole story sound smooth. May the Nine continue their partonage.
Much Love,
Eddie