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by psychocatblah

person thrnbrooke
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh they need to talk! What Harry is doing is wrong! He needs to ask, yell, scream .... something because practically raping Draco. My heart breaks for them. What did Severus do to the book? What is the book suposed to do?
person Fefs
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always... I hate snape.. Hey. dont you think harry and Draco need to talk more with each other? I miss their talks, and right now they seem to need this... Did i already tell you i hate snape? Please be a fast updater.. your fic is just to perfect for your own good! I dont want you to have a personal life! Just write for us all day, would you? Kidding (kinda of)Hugs and congratulations!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! There\'s enough secrecy going on to tear these two apart. This is not good. Snape has planted the seeds in Draco\'s mind and Harry... well with what Richard said and what is going on ... he\'s got plenty of doubt as well!
person Quidgal
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... That last bit made me feel so sad for Draco. It\'s his fault for being stupid about everything, but all he wants is his boyfriend. Aww... anyways, great update! Keep up the great work!
person smurf
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sticks out bottom lip in a pout* I\'m not sure how to feel about it when Harry\'s mad at draco. On one hand, i love it and can\'t get enough of it and on the other, I\'m sad that they\'re fighting...lol

update again soon plz!
person ura
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is such a selfish prick! Who cares about previous liaisons? It was before Harry and Draco got together. I also do not like that Harry does not allow Draco to top because of some stupid control issues. He admitted himself that Draco did not hurt during the first experience. Whereas Harry himself did hurt Draco before he got a heck of it. Harry does not notice that Draco needs to top to reassure his worthiness. Harry does not notice Draco\'s psychological issues at all, because Harry is too self-centered. It is somehow all about him right now. During their last love-making he hurt Draco and did not notice it as well. I think Harry should be punished for his thoughtlessness in one way or another.

I hope Draco will get support at least from Ron and Hermione when the need rises in spite of his offensive behavior. He is not evil. In fact, Draco is a very caring person and the recent behavior of Harry makes Harry undeserving of Draco. Something or somebody should help Harry to reconsider his attitude.

Anyway, great chapter! I cannot wait now for the next Sunday when you update!
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! I had a feeling this Richard was trouble! Draco feels it too. He tried to make Harry doubt Draco. What happens next?
person Fefs
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God, I love this fic so much! It was great to see that Ron and Draco are starting a friendship.. When i read about This richard guy toutching Harry i almost had a fit! But then when Harry got pissed by the guy i was relieved again! Please update soon, ok? This fic is soooo good! Just as good as the prequel! Hugs!
person ura
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. The talk between Ron and Draco was a lot of fun to read. I am glad that they are somewhat starting getting along. Draco needs more friendly people around him.

The Richard guy does sound very suspicious. I hope he will not ruin the relationships between Harry and Draco.

Update soon!

person ura
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.

All these mean portrets! Draco should not listen to them, end of story!

Why is Harry so afraid of being a bottom. He should do it for Draco at least once in a while as a show of trust.

The interaction between Draco, Ron and Hermione was funny. I hope that Draco will learn to appreciate them and other inhibitants of the house.