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by psychocatblah

person The Queen of the Darkness
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love it! Can\'t wait to see what you have in store. :)
person ura
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Violent Harry is scary. But I am so glad that Snape is finally gone from the house and Draco does not have to spy on Snape anymore.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Has Severus defected back? What happens next? Need chapter 12!
person fraser
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"please sir i want some more\" - attempts to sound like oliver twist
there is more right?
person ura
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Harry has learned his lesson and is trying to be considerate to Draco now. Draco needs all the gentle affection that Harry could give him.

Dumbledore is disgusting. Draco should have refused to meet with Snape. It is his right, war or no war.

Good old Remus. Harry desparetely needs some adults watching his interests. At least Remus offers some help.

Please please please do not let Snape ever touch Draco again!

Cannot wait for next Sunday!
person Fefs
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. poor draco!! He is realy traumatyzed!! I\'m glad you showed this caring Remus, it\'s good to know somebody really care for Harry. I\'m so curious to know how this fic is going to end!! It\'s just so good!! Till next sunday! Hugs!
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 11! Harry still hasn\'t told Draco about that kiss. Has he not learned his lesson about secrets? Maybe a few spells need to be cast on Severus.
person The Queen of the Darkness
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank Merlin! I was very worried there...too much trama. First Harry being all mean, then Snape, then Bella, then the cliff! Dude...poor Draco. The toothbrush scene was very theraputic...nicely done. I\'m soooo very happy that they\'re at least talking and seem to be working through things. I can\'t even begin to tell you how happy I am that they\'re talking and cuddling! Keep up the fabulous work as I try to patiently wait for the next update!
person kingslady
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I sure hope you\'re going to address Harry\'s horrible behavior in the next few chapters. I\'m really tired of Draco just taking all of Harry\'s abuse, he shouldn\'t have just forgiven Harry so easily. After all, Harry has been taking things out on Draco alot lately, he\'s practically raped Draco on several occasions and just gave Draco away to a man he knows wants to sexually assault Draco. At this point I can honestly say Harry makes me sick!
person ura
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very very nice chapter. Thanks for saving Draco from clutches of both DEs and Snape!

I like the way you describe Remus and how he tried to help Harry. Nice chap!

I do not know why but I feel a bit sorry for Richard.

Snape is as a vile coward as ever. Why would not he leave Draco alone? Sounds like a sick obsession. I would not mind if somebody cast a castration curse on him.

Anyway, great story! I always wait impatiently for Sundays updates. Thanks!