rate_review Reviews

Well-paced story, if a little fast. The only thing that made reading difficult was the lack of paragraph breaks. Especially on the internet, where the text is usually smaller and lines much wider... it\'s hard to take in so much information at once without a breather.

Otherwise, I look forward to your next chapter

Write the second one. The first was hot.

a very hot scene. it was nicely done, although maybe a little fast, but teenagers and their hormones... hehe it seems to me that neither was a virgin. with hermione\'s relationship with ron i guess that would explain her lack of, but how did harry get so good? just a thought. i think you should post the second bit. i would like to read it.

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