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for In Front of Us All Along

by JayCee

person aglaia
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, yes... the \'problems\' associated with the male libido... not so much of a problem for the recipient party, but... and i\'ll stop there...
lovely begining! i hope you continue it
lia
person tabitoo
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank\'s for the plot. Great story, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Please post again soon.
person Quidgal
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the tension build up, you don\'t ALWAYS need the \"fun\" stuff... Although it is really nice to have. Anyways, keep up the good work!
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron! I wonder if hermione feels the same... good plot, I like the idea
person Hoku
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fic is the freaking bomb. The whole mind set with Harry was freaking cool. Not only is everone obsessed about Hermione...but Harry jacking off thinking about her was freaking great! I mean...not everyone can do that! LMAO!. But great story none the less. Very interesting and to the point, can\'t wait for the next chapter...and I\'m wondering what might happen next with Harry...or Ron and Hermione..mmmm...Peace Out!!
person scabbers_weasley
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I looooooooooved your story!!! I kept waiting for Hermione to show up and take care of his \"problem\" LOL! Great job!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start... keep it up. I\'ll be following this to see how it goes. I\'m looking forward to reading more.