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for Malfoy\'s Mate

by anonnomore

person Anon
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ENEMA!

SO NOT SEXY. Not because it\'s squicky but it\'s not does not convey anything this reader would enjoy. UGH!
person Susanna
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Can\'t wait for the next one. One thing though...I could do without the Snape stuff. Lots of Draco/Hermione would be better!!
person strawberris
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im a little confused about the part where u said the male veela gives birth to the male veela, how does that happen really?
person REI
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find this last chapter *very* confusing. Also, an engima is a mystery: an enema is fluid inserted rectally.
person liz
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG please update soon I need more!!!
person Kill Bill
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say maybe you should back down a little from
the dominance stand point, it\'s some what controling
in teh relationship, I mean she is pregnant and she
needs to be cared for, not just bruitly fucked all day.
So please update a little quicker and kind of get
Draco to realize that he was being too harsh. Thanks
for updating though! I bid you farwell.
person Midnight
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story... but it would be better if Hermione enjoyed the sex.
person beckie
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome ...but so messed up ..messed up in a good way ..i hope theres more to come ..please ..pretty please with sugar on top
person liz
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON IM DYING HERE
person Kitty Kat
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!!! This Fic is sooo messed up, but it\'s AWESOME!!!

Oh man, I\'ve been laughing waay to hard.

Plz, UpDate Soon!!!