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for Malfoy\'s Mate

by anonnomore

person courtney
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more... i wanna read more
person blah
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this chapter was so good.
person Rosalind
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intense! I really like Draco as a Veela. He has the look and the demeanor for one. Now if he were just a bit older say thirtyish... oh well I guess we\'ll never know.. Good writing.
person dragons girls
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is sooo different from the ones i have read. I LOVE IT.

DRACO is so mean though. He is cruel. Hope u can at least show some compasion to hermione.
other than that. THIS STORY IS GREAT! love it....... update soon.

Are u almost done with this story? ^ _ ^\'
person LaLa
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You have a REALLY twisted mind...I LIKE IT!!! OMG! Draco is bigger than 12 inches??? Shish! No wonder Hermione is damaged internally. And his mother...as much as it makes me sick to know that a mother would be comfortable enough to her her son\'s privates... I really liked it too.

I can\'t believe that our hot-headed Hermione is a poppet in this fic. Continue soon. Don\'t even think of giving up this story. I LOVE DRACO VEELA. All possessive and jelouse and protective. I also liked how you actually changed him phisically...the wings and the claws.

Ps. I am not sure what he said to Lucius. Is he not his father???
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Wow, If i could draw I would draw what you described Draco looking like. he sounds wonderful. Update soon! I hope there are more than one chapter left!!! Email me when you do... Maureen@remcom.net
person Kill Bill
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve acutally had a free week excpet for work on the weekend, but
sorry for my behavior of reviewing poeple about updating. I bassically
have become glued to Adult FanFiction this week since there isn\'t anything
else to do. I mean my friends are all plaining parties and have invited me,
which was only on the weekend, so I\'m just sitting like a good little girl
reading about many things you can\'t get in the books in school except if
you were studyingthe anicent part of Greek art work, that\'s a whole other
story, so please if your one of those two day updaters, come I;m waiting.
Sorry I\'m being mean again, oh god someone get me off this thing, well
anyways I hope your having a nice week. Good job on the story, love it!
person Jess
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t like the fact that Hermione has no control over stuff. The Veela relationship isn\'t supposed to be like that, where one controls the other. And he keeps hurting her, if he truly loved her he would stop and do what\'s best for her, not continually abuse her.
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Continue please.
person Jessica Hayes
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome so far