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for Malfoy\'s Mate

by anonnomore

person Susanna
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This HAS to be the best story on the entire site!!!!!!!!!! I can\'t wait until you update the story!!!!!
person Kat
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story so far, you need to update and quick!
person anon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Veela do NOT have wings. Yes their faces turn birdlike when angry but they don\'t turn into birds and they don\'t have wings. It was VERY hard to determine what was the characters speaking and what was just action since your quotation marks only make randome appearances. Your sentance structure leaves much to be desired. Your plot is so full of holes it rivals swiss cheese and nothing makes any sense. Just thought I woudl let you know.
person of no importance
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa that was intence i so can\'t wait till you update this story.
person Eddie
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
twisted but very good. keep writing.
Much Love
Eddie
person slyswn
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every good author is a little twisted.

Mmm another yummy chapter.

Poppy and Sev are hysterical

MOre! More!
person LaLa
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a GODDESS for updating so soon. I LOVED this chapter. You are by all means a SMUT QUEEN of fiction. Please continue soon. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Oh PLEASE make Draco jelouse of someone for looking at HIS Hermione. I want him jelouse and possessive...it gets me hot and heavy!

I know it will be too good to be true if you update in the next few days...but PLEASE do. I am on my knees here...
person LaLa
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And Feel Better!
person Kill Bill
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Malfoys going to school, I can\'t wait, I hope Hermione
get\'s in trouble with Draco or they could actually have
a nice night with romance instead of rough sex. Please
at least have one loving sex scene, the rest let be rough
I don\'t care. Also update because when stories are good,
they need to be updated fast. Thank you so much for a
a dominating male, I do like that way as you know.
person jessie
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the whole Snape/Poppy thing