rate_review Reviews

I love this story! You're a great writer!!
Please update ;)

I really REALLY wish this would be updated but...*sigh* oh well I guess

I highly doubt you will continue with this story but I just like to say that this story had me at the edge of my seat the entire time. The part that I must say is my absolute favorite would have to be the parts with Snape and Pomphrey. I just want to know what she saw when she when she walked in on him and what does he suppose to be? But anyway, even though this story may never be finished I would just like to say that this story is very well written and that you are a very good writer.

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thats all i can say.
i was kinda weirded out
but read in none the less :)
sodomy (not really my cup of tea)
But what ever
there is a reason this is adult fan fiction
i like the fact that you made draco twisted "Little Bastard"
It works for him and prefer it in his character to a mushy, bend over backwards pile of veela goop
hate when they make him too pussy whipped.
as or the watchers?
pervs

This has got to be the best start of a veela story I've ever read!! Extreme disappointed you chose not to finish it though, ugh!!

I really like the story and I hope you'll continue it someday. I really wasn't expecting Severus and Poppy together though... I especially liked how Draco and the Veela were separate and then became one again. =)

I liked a lot, interesting and in depth lore for the Veela. I do have a question about Draco's gift of "honored promises." Does that mean she has to keep her previous promise to obey him? That would conflict with her never conceding her free will, so I don't understand how that would work. If Draco had Hermione as his slave lacking the ability to challenge him, that would take away what he loves about her. The fact she is strong willed, independent, intelligent, stubborn and bossy. I am interested to see how her summer lessons come into play and who paid for it. It will be sad if and when the conflict with Harry and Ron relationship with Hermione causes jealousy within Draco. It is weird how Draco/Veela is almost a new person or character, it isn't really doesn't feel like Draco anymore. Whether or not that is what you wanted to do I don't know. I like the subplot with Severus it kind of lightens things a bit.

-Witch Myth

RE: chapters one through four

Oh my God, this story is so twistedly, sexy as hell...I love it! It is more original than a lot of the tripe that is being offered by the majority of the writers. Isn't that sad?

This story has such potential:
1) VEELA!Draco & Hermione
2) BAT!Snape & Poppy
3) Harry & Ginny
4) Fred & Angelina
5) George & Katie

All the pervs present to "witness" her mating ritual with Draco..."All of her professors, Narcissa, Lucius, Arthur, Charlie, and Bill Weasley as well as several other people she did not know were present." Let's not forget those that had gathered upon the Astronomy Tower (pay per view) to see the ritual: 4th years & up (if they paid Fred & George that is): Fred, George, Ron, Ginny Weasley; Harry, Neville, Crabbe, Pansy, etc.

Please write more, or at least give us the addy of where else you have this story posted, with additional chapters, so that we may get our fix of tastey smut, and fantastic plotlines.

;~D

i really like this fic and hope that someday you continue it