rate_review Reviews

Definitely intriguing. I do assume that Narcissa doesn\'t care for the fact that they needed her to have Draco. And where is Draco going to fall into this little slice of domestic bliss? I\'ll look forward to more.

Sorry, I remembered that I found a very small error in Chapter 3. \"A father wouldn\'t think of his child the way Lucius was thinking of Narcissa.\"

This is definitely an excellent story! Besides being well-written, it has a plot I have never seen before. Nisha is an intriguing OC and you\'ve given new humanity to Lucius Malfoy. And you can never have too much Snape in a story in my books! There is just one small problem.



Nisha wished that things hadn\'t happened as they had. She wished that she could still be the child she\'d once been. But too much time passed in the world had shown her that she couldn\'t go back and that she had to exist with the knowledge she\'d acquired throughout her near forty years of life. Both the good and the bad. She closed her eyes and took a breath. She needed to think about this and see if there wasn\'t some way she could sneak away.


but if she was fifteen when she became Malfoy\'s whatever, and Draco is 13, did she stay with them for 10 years? She should be 29, possibly 30. Other than that, excellent story and I will be following it!

~Lisa

Great sofar, cannot wait to see more!

Great chapter and a great start. I look forward to the next on with eagerness and anticipation.

Fabulous, my dear! A wonderful play on Lucius and a vastly different side of the man I must say!