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for Flesh of My Flesh

by lashton

person ewte.lo[
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the part where you put that snape was running to draco and was shoving people out of his way... it\'s funny!!! :)
person Reba Williams
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually HATE mpreg, but for some reason read this anyway. I hate to admit it but I\'m loving it...

I really like the way you are portraying Draco and Severus
person Dragon
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it me, or is anyone else getting ixed signals from Snape?
Is he comforting Draco or hitting on him?
I think the big question here is, who will end up with both Draco and the babe?
His father? Potter? Snape? Who?!
person Colin
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very intense story you\'ve got going here. A fresh angle on the standard angst of an abused Draco with Harry coning to save him. I also liked how you\'ve set the story up ... it is very well timed and the chapters are a reasonable length. Cheers!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter breaks my heart every time.
person The Queen of the Darkness
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I\'m enjoying this story. Loved the sly Harry. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person eve/roarke
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just finished all 3 chapters, I feel like crying for Draco, poor Albus you have wonder about
all he has to sort out at fanfic Hogwarts, Harry being there for him will help, yes I\'m intrigued
which way you will go with this.

Look forward to a update, Good writing, thank you.
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do so love this story!
person Tedra
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m speechless. This is so...so....damn. Update soon.
person kat701
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, can\'t wait for more. This is really well written, it\'s not rushed like some author\'s tend to do. Keep up the good work. :D