rate_review Reviews

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

I read your first chapter a few weeks back, and I saw that you updated it.. I just wanted to let you know that you're doing a great job! The way you write is extremely captivating. =] I encourage you to write more, I would love to read the rest! Keep it up!

Wow that was a fab second chapter. Mmmm i wonder who Ginny has been messing around with and will Draco find out and whats Blaise got to do with anything?

Lots of intrigue!!!!!!!! Oh i cant wait for the next chappie.

Post real soon!

JULES :-)

This is a brilliant story. You have to update and continue this fic....great cliffhanger btw. Well done!

Okay, I usually say nothing if I can't say anything nice, but I must break my rule here. With the second chapter of this story, you have completely maligned an entire category of Catholics. Do some reserach, please. 1. Nuns do not have to be virgins; in fact, many women take holy orders later in life, after having active sexual relationships - some nuns even have grown children. 2. Unless you have given birth, it is entirely impossible to be 100% certain if someone is a virgin by a medical exam alone. 2. Nuns would not risk eternal damnation by committing the cardinal sin of murdering an innocent, assuming something that heinous would even occur to someone (much less a whole group of someones) who had devoted their lives to the Lord's service by caring for the souls and bodies of his children. If it wasn't for the overblown melodrama, stilted dialogue and poor writing that made this second chapter almost amusing in how bad it was, I would be very offended. As it is, I am simply annoyed.

Oh wait. There's a chapter 2! I rescind what I wrote before. Although it was a lovely piece as a one shot... as I so thought before, it's great that there's continuation. Yay =)

Anyway, I'm wondering if there wasn't a better way to kick "Lily" out.. But then again, maybe nuns are a world and a half away.

Wow! Who knew nuns could be such bitches!? Keep writing this story! I can't wait to see what happens next to poor Hermione! Hopefully, Draco will come to his senses and save her and pay back the nuns, too!!

Very interesting story...please keep on writing this...I want to know what happens next...very interesting concept

For a long, long time I've wracked my brains, trying to remember the title or where I read this story previously. Thank god you have posted it here... I recall loving the heartwrenching decision that Draco makes at the end... Although I don't remember reading the part after. It's a bit superfluous and the story would have been stronger through subtlety and left without it, but it is a good conclusion nevertheless.

I've always found something very tragic in the possibility of a relationship between Harry and Hermione, a depth in their bond as presented in the books that would be more pithy than any common love Ron and Hermione are expected to drudge up. Or perhaps it's just me because I believe even more in the ship of D/Hr... and well you know about conflict.

wow i cant wait for an update.