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for Little Pink Pills

by MushroomAnn

person Tamyka
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There\'s something about reading this story at 2-3am when your roommate is sleeping that makes it so much better. I thought I was going to pass out from no oxygen as I tried not to laugh! Great details on the drugs almost makes me want ot try them if it wasn\'t for the fact that their addicting and illegal. Hmm....still an interesting thought. Great story!!!!
person Schelmenbraut
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is very very very good and I want you to write a sequel (if it does not already exist).
I absolutely loved the description of the touching and stroking and so on. Awesome!! *g*
person Jen
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate this, I tried to get a couple last night and now youre taunting me. It makes me want to so bad, youve captured it perfectly. blah, I want it.
person Alexa
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I see yo reposted it. :-)
Come on... write another one... Please?
Love, Alexa.
person B
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Adorable!!! Ironically enough I have been wanting to try E for over a year, but have yet to convince my best friend or her brother to let me try it. *sighs*
And now that I\'ve read this just makes me wnat to try it even more. grrr... lol

~B~
person Alexa
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Really, really loved it.

An original idea, a great performance, and you made feel all those stages. Beautiful and somehow feels more realistic than just having them fall in love out of the blue.

Why aren\'t there more of your stories here? Are there anywhere else?

Write and Post! :-) Can\'t wait for them.
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absoultly LOVED it!! I hope you dont mind, but I\'m going to print it and make every one I know read it! ^ - ^
person emmeline_vance
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya again!

Thanks so much for completing this wonderful story. It\'s hilarious the way you write the effects of ecstacy on them, and I especially loved the steamy scenes.

Keep up the fantastic work. Thanks again! Peace.

Love, me.
person mechee
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the only thing i have to say is WHATS WRONG WITH YOU, YOU GOTTA DO MORE MORE I TELL YOU ok now an with the review. I like the fact that they weren\'t ooc they were just high, and once the high wore off the truth settled in. Its funny how Harry still wanted Draco even after they came down but its believeable please make more to this story call it more little pink pills or something smile This was great Mechee
person JustCallMeDarkness
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darkness frowns, her chin perched on her hand. \"Okay, so I was a little disappointed at the lack of sex. Only a little. But I was reading for a plot! Really!\"

Sam rolls his eyes, and Phiona smirks. Darkness crosses her arms.

\"I was! Really!\"

Sam shakes his head. Phiona laughs maniacally.

Darkness scowls. \"Go eat a dog. Egads. Anyways,\" she waves at author who, hopefully, is still there. \"I approve of the story! Really good job! It\'s nice to read a grammatically correct story with an actual plot from time to time...you never see them anymore...Anyways. Wonderful job.\"

Darkness\'s Rating: 10 (good all-around story. Loved it.)
Phiona\'s Rating: 10 (excellent job at keeping the character\'s personalities straigh, for the most part. Using drugs is cheating, you know!)
Sam\'s Rating: 10 (remarkable grammar and spelling. No errors found/noticed.)