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for Where Others Fear to Tread

by harriet

person Stasha
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love all the stories you write! Thank you so much for providing me with such smutty/plot goodness.
person En4cerMax
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, do keep going. I like the direction this one is headding. Poor Draco, I wonder what happened to him. Hopefully nothing to stressful. Please, write on!
person musama
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re back again!!!!! That was one hell of a chapter you wrote here. I hurt for Harry but so much more for Snape. The poor guy never found someone to love him. Hope you\'ll write the next chapters soon.
person Eowynselixure
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no poor Draco!!! Oh god what happened to the poor love?

(sniffles) Please update I have to know what happens!

*Eowyns elixure
person Anon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay Harry\'s not gay? Or Harry just hasn\'t realsied he\'s gay? o tell me its the latter PLEASE!!! Anyway I loved it and yer you did the redhead thing again but no worries coz respect 2 u if u wrote the entire story on surviettes!

Anyway great chapters! Loved \'em yup! Especially Harrys ran in the third chapter!

Looking good keep going.

*Eowyns elixure
person Dominic Shade
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah, holy shitmonkeys, excellent hon! I can\'t wait for Snape to pull some crap like, he has to have children or something. But that was simply great \'NO SEX\'. Psh...as if. Snape\'s dark and brooding, Harry\'s young and naive...a perfect pair, lol. Aw man, how are they gonna act during school? I so want Harry to pull some shit like \'You have to be nice to me in Potions\' or somethin\', anyway...good times and rock on hon.
person Jen
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome so far, its great.
person eve/roarke
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I realized you had posted a new story I was really pleased, I thoroughly enjoyed your previous one which went into
Harry\'s transition period. However I am so disappointed with this one, what is it with you writers lately, nearly every other
story has Harry having to marry Snape, the reasons he needs to do this just get more ridiculous, take yours:-

1) Snape must marry someone of Voldemort\'s choosing or die.
Your answer: He will force via wizard debt Harry Potter to marry him, great, not only going against the Dark Lord but bonding
himself to his greatest enemy, therefore Voldie just might kill him anyway huh! doesn\'t work.

2) Harry can not say no, because to do so would go against wizard law,
My answer: Harry is the boy who lived, wizard world already according to JKR. and book one, read it, owes Harry a Debt which cannot be paid.
Therefore Snape\'s debt is cancelled via Harry\'s demise of Voldie first time round.

3) Harry can work out the contract terms he requires no 3 is no Sex, Minerva says good.
My question: Wizard/Witch marriage requires the bonding of mind and body otherwise the marriage is null and void, therefore
how can Minerva not tell Harry he must consumate the marriage??

4) Finally why doesn\'t Snape just sit tight in Hogwarts, he would not have to marry Harry and vice versa.

If you had come up with a solid reason I might have excepted it, your reason is not strong enough. Now you might say, read on it will be
explained, but I just can not see how you are going to justify this.



person Squall-sama
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love how you post a ton of chapters at one time and they\'re always, at the least, once a week. *sighs happily* For once I don\'t have to stress over not getting to read a fic that i love for a long time! ^_^
person Angel
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cuddles even harder* Can we speed this up a little? (the real question; WHERE IS THE SEX!? *giggles*) I really like this!