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Awwww, I feel so sad. Poor inxperienced Harry. sniff sniff.
Poor miserable Snape... I\'m just sure he\'s crying in the bathroom.
You write a wonderfully tragic romance . I\'m eager to read more.
Thanks!

Poor, poor Harry. Bad first time...I bet the worst part was that Severus left. It seems such a cold action, but Severus was never the compassionate type.

Poor Harry! I really feel for him! I loved the way you depicted his first time! Not only did you capture the awkwardness between Snape & Harry, nut you also brought to life Harry\'s nervousness & his side to this experience. I found it to be very realistic to a real couple\'s experience (& the individual\'s) to being together for the first time. (Although for a little bit, Harry did find it to feel kinda good) I think Harry isn\'t sure what to feel about sex yet. He could be gay & not know since he\'s not thought about it too much. As for Snape leaving, I think he was feeling nervous as well & left because he felt badly about Harry not enjoying the experience (yet). On another note, I think it would be a kicker if they got pregnant right away! They plan to at some point anyway. I also wonder what\'s with Draco & that tattoo he has. I love your quick updates! I can\'t wait to read more on this fic! Priss

OH NO! Poor Harry o dear o dear. Oh you have to let Harry have some fun too! I liked the way you did this though it was very realistic. Please update soon.

*Eowyns elixure

Oh, poor Harry! I\'m actually teary-eyed over the wedding night scene! Wonderfully done, and I commend the fact that you didn\'t make it perfect for them the first time. Keep up the great writing.

Your depiction of Severus and Harry

Excellent voice for Dumbledore. So happy to see another HP story of yours!

poor Harry...

how much will he change now? (you said someting like this...)
I hope, they\'ll come to an understanding...someday..

But I want to thank you very much for updating this often and always two chapters, thx :*

Bye, Lils

Ok, so I finally finished this story! OMG!! I feel really, really bad for Harry, but I can\'t help but feel bad for Severus too! Their first night together and already Severus is feeling rejected. Not that I blame Harry or anything because he really didn\'t want this, but still it\'s not hard to feel rather bad for them both. And what abotu Draco\'s tattoo?? He\'s not Snape\'s or something is he? OMG!

Poor Harry! I\'m almost crying here ... but I\'m loving it. it\'s definantly a good kind of hurt I have inside for the poor boy! Please moooooooreeeee!