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ahhh i hate you!! where\'s the chp 22???? AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

good that they\'re finally going to deal with their marital bed issues. the first sex scene was definitely one of the most memorable sex scene i\'ve read =P it\'s sad but memorable... someone kill draco please. or snape. wait but then we can\'t have the story wihtout snape.

thanks for the update!

oooooooooooooooooo! Draco is a slimy git for sure! What great chapters. I need more. I loved the race back to the castle. Oh and the kiss on the pitch was great too.

cdk

I was so wrong about this story, I totally apologise, taking the story as seperate from the books I see now you needed to
write it how you have. Although my questions and points were valid, I realize they could not be in connection with your story.

The way you have slowly introduced the feelings into the relationship, Harry not enjoying the sexual bonding once a month I
think could be because no other side of a physical relationship has come about.

The last two chapters have been quite thought provoking, I had tears in my eyes for Harry, Severus and Draco.

I should have known having read your other story that you knew where you were going to take your readers, I am in awe of your
ability draw us into what is happening, will be waiting with abated breath, (thats not going to be good if I have to wait to long)
for next update.

Will once more apologise and state in future to give the story a chance before pulling it apart. Sorry.

A great chapter...wow...

poor Harry... :((

and Snape really didn\'t know about it...but Harry was right with all he said to Severus...

I\'m really interessted in your next chapter so hurry up! :)

Lils

You are the update king/queen/omnipotent ruler. Really liked the way you handled Harry\'s blow-up in the last chapter, and slightly surprised to hear Snape\'s revelation to Harry (although not completely, as there had to have been some reason why Snape chose Harry for the bond). I\'m just slightly miffed at Snape because he didn\'t seem to fight too terribly hard against Draco\'s advances. You know, your GODSON? *narrows eyes at Snape*

I love you and thank you...The kiss!!!!! He was already in love. *swoons*

Wow! Fabulous story. Love that Severus is in love with Harry. After Ch. 21 I was worried. You have me hooked. Please post again asap.

OMG! I am in shock! I kind of knew that Draco had the hots for Severus, but the way you ended that chapter was...wow. I only just found you and I spent two days reading \"Love, Lies and Lonliness\", which I adored BTW. Now I spent the last day reading this one and I have to wait for more! Oh pain, agony, **cries pitifully**. You have made the characters come to live. None of them are OOC and that\'s what makes this story so delectable. Severus trying to make the best of what he considers a bad situation, Harry not understanding anything that\'s happening due to ignorance of all things relating to the wizarding world...all of them playing their parts so perfectly. I can\'t hold my breath waiting for more because I might suffocate not knowing how long it might take you to update. Here\'s hoping that it\'s not just soon, but plentiful.

Here T-chan, for whom her paper bag arrived too late and had already passed out. ^_~

I\'ve enjoyed these last few chapters quite a lot. A quick-paced, yet believable way to develop Harry and Severus relationship. The little details here and there that show Severus was already deeply involved, and that Harry was falling hard to the charms of the bond. IMHO, I think if the bond developed so fast, it was because one of the partners was already in love and met the emotional requirements of someone as needy as Harry. Oh, the angst! *giggles*

Now, fortunately, we\'ll see more serious romance between the boys? Yes? *puppy eyes*

BTW, Draco was fantastic! So different from LL&L! I like that. That an author can use the same character in two different stories and in such different ways. Draco certainly strikes me as a little unhealthyly obssessed with his godfather in this fic. Poor lad. *shakes head*

dan you\'re so leading us on! please more! and love you for the fast update! (more?)

i like your remus and sirius. and snape and harry. draco can go to hell unless he provides a good explanation for being the third wheel.