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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please may I have some more? I am enjoying the story so much I won\'t rant on my favorite grammatical pet peeves. (There are a few, but for the most part you write quite well.)
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh great 3 chapters at once, is that going to be usual now, 3 chapters instead of two.
I have a friend who actually has a father who used to be in the S.A.S. your description of
J.J. could be him, he even runs a pub/restaurant now, not been to Cornwall while in England
have you?
Loved Severus\'s talk to Harry on the train, how he wouldn\'t be the ideal mate etc., then goes
all jealous and protective with Harry. Brilliant.
Look forward along with the other readers to the next 3 chapters due tomorrow.
I have a friend who actually has a father who used to be in the S.A.S. your description of
J.J. could be him, he even runs a pub/restaurant now, not been to Cornwall while in England
have you?
Loved Severus\'s talk to Harry on the train, how he wouldn\'t be the ideal mate etc., then goes
all jealous and protective with Harry. Brilliant.
Look forward along with the other readers to the next 3 chapters due tomorrow.
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say let Jasper gnaw on Harry a little, let Severus know what it feels like! But... I\'m sure the chapters are probably already written, and then there\'s the added factor that you probably couldn\'t give a rat\'s hindquarters what I think! But that\'s just my two cents, being the petty, grudge-holding person that I am. ^_^
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an update. I just want them to shag like bunnies and Harry to perhaps be up for the challenge.
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i beg to differ; i thought the last few chapters were very exciting! it\'s good to know that the OoP are not he only ones working on the light\'s side; god how can anyone won a war with only a handful of capable people? puppy harry is really cute... and to be expected in a way given age diff and depth of knowledge. yey love rival (?) for snape! haha! can\'t wait to see how that turn out, even tho i think we all know who has to win!
btw how long do you estimate this story to be?
btw how long do you estimate this story to be?
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this fic more and more. I like how true to character your Severus is, just cos he\'s in love doesn\'t make him all sappy and romantic lol. And I\'m intrigued by his brother, can\'t wait for the training to begin.
Hugs
Kat
Hugs
Kat
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No cheating please! I hate reading about infidelity. Snape and Harry together forever...happily ever after. This is land of make believe in which I willingly dwell
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Harry\'s going to be some sort of war machine? Knowing everything about everything? I hope not but to train hasn\'t hurt anyone right... swetty Harry being eyed by Sevvy (and his brother) ... yeah I like that. Severus with a brother, it\'s deffrent and I like that.
And right now I love you for updating so many chapters. I couldn\'t belive my eyes first but it was real 3 CHAPTERS! *yay* cuddles you sooo much!
And right now I love you for updating so many chapters. I couldn\'t belive my eyes first but it was real 3 CHAPTERS! *yay* cuddles you sooo much!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... where was the sex scene? Weasley\'s in the bedroom and a cold Snape on the train... Snape knows Harry wants him... What in the world is their problem? More chapters!!!! Pretty please?
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...w-what....WHY WOULD YOU LEAVE ME THERE?! THERE\'S NO NEED TO DO IT ONE CHAPTER AT A TIME!!!! I SWEAR I\'LL STILL READ IT!! AwWwWwW!!!!!!! *breathes* OH GOD! I SEE A LIGHT! I....EVERYTHING\'S GOING BLACK........! Only one thing can save me now.....A GOOD SEX SCENE!!!! ;)