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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! no more UST! congrat to snape and harry!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RiffRaff-
I am in love with this story! I usually only read hp/dm stories but a friend of mine suggested this one. You are an extremly talented writer and should seriously consider trying it as a career. I love the way the bond has affected Harry and I was absoloutly exstatic when i found out how Severus truly felt for Harry. Your sex scenes are exceptional and that last one in the cottage was soooooo Hotttttt! I worry about this Jasper character though! I think he should keep his \"abnormally large nose\" out of Harry and Snape\'s relationship. He obviously has motives other than just repaying his debt. I read a ton of stories on this website and yours is by far the best in the way of writing and plot. Please finish it...I despise keeping up with a story only to have the author dissaparate from the earth in the middle. I offer your muse an assortment of Honeydukes finest chocolates and toffees in an effort to keep her \"on top\" of this story. If you have a mailing list for when you update please add me to it!
Many Thanks for an Excellent Read
~Proprieter_of_Honeydukes~
I am in love with this story! I usually only read hp/dm stories but a friend of mine suggested this one. You are an extremly talented writer and should seriously consider trying it as a career. I love the way the bond has affected Harry and I was absoloutly exstatic when i found out how Severus truly felt for Harry. Your sex scenes are exceptional and that last one in the cottage was soooooo Hotttttt! I worry about this Jasper character though! I think he should keep his \"abnormally large nose\" out of Harry and Snape\'s relationship. He obviously has motives other than just repaying his debt. I read a ton of stories on this website and yours is by far the best in the way of writing and plot. Please finish it...I despise keeping up with a story only to have the author dissaparate from the earth in the middle. I offer your muse an assortment of Honeydukes finest chocolates and toffees in an effort to keep her \"on top\" of this story. If you have a mailing list for when you update please add me to it!
Many Thanks for an Excellent Read
~Proprieter_of_Honeydukes~
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so regularly. I love this story.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update...Whoo and hoo. this is getting interesting!!! When is Severus getting back? Is Harry up the poll?
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that Jasper does not seem that trustworthy despite being Severus\' brother, and in his debt. He seems to be a little too interested in Harry.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, first two chapter really good. BUT the third, Harry\'s real first time written very well,
toroughly enjoying it. Thank you.
toroughly enjoying it. Thank you.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls to the floor* OH GOD!!! *picks herself up* oh that was just... um...I cant think...ug....*passes out cold*
spaz
spaz
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do I catch the smell of diapers? Great chapters! I really like how you\'ve handled the developement of Snape\'s & Harry\'s sexual relationship. Well done. As for Draco, I wonder what\'s he doing? Can\'t wait for more! You\'re awesome! Priss
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My, I\'m feeling utterly spoiled! So many great chapters in such a short time! Not that I\'m complaining, no. Not at all! I\'m actually quite tempted to officialy name you: \"Riff-raff, the Update Queen!\" (Or is it King? *mumble, mumble*)
So, anyway, things that I like:
- Jasper. He\'s such an intriguing character. Plus, I like Severus in the role of the younger brother.
- Harry & Severus\' relationship. Very true to character. As someone else mentioned, it\'s good to see Snape in love but \"un-sappy\".
- Their \'first\' time together. *swoon* That\'s how it\'s supposed to be! Go, Snape! ^_~
- The 3 debts. They give personality to all the characters involved in a neat, simple, yet effective way.
And, now I must complain, because all this idea of the \"surrogate husband\" (nicely emplyed concept, BTW; very common in past centuries and in some societies nowadays for a single brother to take his borther\'s wife if he dies) has left me pinning for some Jasper/Harry quality time. Greedy of me, I know. It\'s just that the idea has so many interesting posibilites, what with Jasper showing some strange interest in Harry. But, he\'s probably innocently intrigued by Harry and it\'s my pervy mind the one who\'s imagining things.
PS I\'m getting a bit lost within the time frame. Aproximately what month they are? Is Harry already 17 years old?
So, anyway, things that I like:
- Jasper. He\'s such an intriguing character. Plus, I like Severus in the role of the younger brother.
- Harry & Severus\' relationship. Very true to character. As someone else mentioned, it\'s good to see Snape in love but \"un-sappy\".
- Their \'first\' time together. *swoon* That\'s how it\'s supposed to be! Go, Snape! ^_~
- The 3 debts. They give personality to all the characters involved in a neat, simple, yet effective way.
And, now I must complain, because all this idea of the \"surrogate husband\" (nicely emplyed concept, BTW; very common in past centuries and in some societies nowadays for a single brother to take his borther\'s wife if he dies) has left me pinning for some Jasper/Harry quality time. Greedy of me, I know. It\'s just that the idea has so many interesting posibilites, what with Jasper showing some strange interest in Harry. But, he\'s probably innocently intrigued by Harry and it\'s my pervy mind the one who\'s imagining things.
PS I\'m getting a bit lost within the time frame. Aproximately what month they are? Is Harry already 17 years old?