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for Where Others Fear to Tread

by harriet

person chaos
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! Loved this story so far! please oh please hurry and update...Sorry about your broken bones ~ maybe we can bribe someone into typeing while you dictate?

Great way to weave a story. I am very intrigued!
person debz
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
preggie wow oh dear i hope he had triplets you know maby you could have another story another way harry mabey gay not ever dated anyone and all sixth year and seventh year he trains with serverus snape after appoligises telling him he was sorry for his dads faults knoing what it was like to own a life dept to someone you hate he respects the man and likes him then voldie captures and snape is made to rape him next day voldie himself was going to but harry got his magic bult up from his magical core and killed voldie with wandelss love magic power the dark lord new not he doesnt understand love he hit a death eater the death eaters die 1 by 1 all with dark mark harry saving snape in the progress harry ends up pregnant with three babys and after he graduates he goes to a house he has his seventh year summer he goes to gringotts and realises he has houses manors and a castle in england not far from snape manor and is filthy rich he changes he has tattos a pheniox or drangon on his back and pheniox snake on his two arms let his hair grow in and got highlitghts maby silver and red ? he gives the weasleys a new house after voldie destroys the burrow after them getting out after harry warns them they leave just in case and in the end saving the intire weasley family snape not being there was never suspected !!! he ends up in the inner circle he lives in his manor now he ends up pregnant he had dropped potions coz he couldint look at the man well it happened severus had appologiesd but harry had exepted it but it didint make it easyer he watches as his childern are brought into the world in the corner after harrys asleep he goes to see them they have black hair and onxy eyes. cho whom had beytrayed him had his children hiddn from him they are three when the ministy found them (fifth year summer hols) that very same day so he has five kids and hes alone actually he has house elf\'s dobby winky dinky dade jade they will help him snape wants to know his kids uncnown to everyone he had gotten feelings for harry when he had taught him but never made a move coz he was a student he begs harry to let him and ends up playing gulit trip on him he knew harry his homelife he knew more than anyone will ever in the end he caves saying he could he apparates to the ministy and gets snapes account oppened again he had been relying on hogwarts wages he had prommised the man he would try and he got them back and fudge thrown out office he is the heir of merlin and hogwarts four snape the heir of the antiencts or woterver they kids are gonna be brillant poweful they get his account oppened and he gets 10000000 gallons for it closing and 10000000000000000 gallons for being a spy and order of merlin first class and harry went on telling the prophet the lifes and familys he had saved not just muggles wizarding familys too !! including the abots fleches creevys zabins scotts scoots woods etc. ... you think he becomes the hero in most peoples eyes warned the goblins of an attak etc...the part dobby the house elf had in the war protecting harry potter the elfs were not treated as equlsalong with goblins and centures snakes were not thought of as evil there was a potion out for people to speak paresltong once they understood them they were favourites in hogwarts among owls and maby snape stays as potions master but his kids see him everyday maby harry becomes preggie again ad they beat the weasleys in having more kids the ppotter-snape clang are coming hoggies will never be the same with there invisiblit y cloacks prank book brooms maradures map caios regrens they all are sorted into slytherin after all snapes are knowing for slys snape new harry was ment to be in sly so they were obviously were going to be sorted there there were not horrible rummors about all slys being evil all houses had bad eggs was all was said. the wizarding world was good as it got. or if you want it could have only nocked the death eaters out and they gotten away up to you.

hope you do the story i dont have good writing skills nor chappy person.
person antipyro
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did I ever figure this one out? Uhhhh....like morning sickness isn\'t a dead giveaway. lol

Try some of the other various symptoms of pregnancy. If you\'re not familiar with them they are;
very tired, must have a nap at lunch and early evening; poor hair, i.e. not shiny and bouncy; teeth hurt; bloating; heartburn; restlessness; food cravings and nausea towards certain smells, ugh, I still have them over 12 years later, they never go away; and of course, something you\'ve identified, overprotectedness.

You go....I\'ll keep reading and reviewing....!
person auburn
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it soooo much! More please...begging on knees....offering first born (you can have him if you want him but he\'ll eat you into the poorhouse and doesn\'t even do windows).
person Chys
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your HP fics! He\'s preggerz? Awesome! Make Snape change the diapers. *snickers*
Or Harry does it manually all along and Snape teaches him the automatic diaper changing spell. *lol*
H: You mean I could have been doing that all along? *glareodeath*
S: *smirk*
person Kaitryn
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving the plot!!! im saddened by evil draco since I <3 him to peices, but I suppose it is in character for him! do you have a e-mail list for update notifications?! if so, PLEASE add me! i\'m dying to see harry\'s reaction *besides passing out* to the news! keep up the terrific work!
person Kitsune Morgan
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about the fingers being broken. I\'ve had a few messed up fingers before and it isn\'t fun. But this story is so good. I can\'t wait to read the next part every time I read. You always leave it at a good part and there is never a shortage of action. I hope that there will be more in a few more days or so. Hope that you feel better soon. Hope the fingers heal the right way.
person nerak
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Love rival (?) and jealous husband, formerly despicable git now totally sympathize-able, more harry puppy action, and now a lovely baby to look forward to! What more can we ask for (except more hot and steamy SSHP action)!? Snape probably wasn\'t thinking of expanding his family at this particular moment, poor guy. I was wondering how they\'re going to train harry fully; they simply don\'t have the time. Now for sure they can\'t make him into Mr. All-around Hero overnight!

More more! XD

I really do sympathize with poor Draco, but Harry is just that much cuter in his clueless way~ And someone please skewer Lucius for making such disgusting promise to LV!
person detah
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. I\'m sorry about your accident. Hope you get better.
person Kat Potter
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Can\'t wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! :D