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Wow that was a great fic. I loved it. Poor Draco, I feel really bad for him he had no choice but to be the bad guy. I hate him and feel sorry for him at the same time. You are really great at characterization, I got a good feel of all of the main characters. I like the baby's name Alexander James. I also like how Snape is still Snape. I read a lot of fics where all of a sudden Snape is all nice and kind and it's all a mask. Here Snape was still his sarcastic, cranky, demanding, cynical self.

OMG... I totally didn't see that coming! You're like

A truly wonderfully written story. It had a nice mix of emotions. Love the way you wrote out the characters. This was a really enjoyable read that I had to finish it in one sitting

Great chapter. Had fun visualizing as I read about the new position. I even like the way that you situated Harry's pregnancy. No over the top, just right. Even in explanation.

Great job so far. I like what I've read even though its a common background story. The personality and the description of the story is very well done.

Lovely, read so far.

awww, how cute, maybe u should have made Harry have a 2 years old daughter in there! that would have been adrouble!

Alas, I was really prepared to read this story. I found the link to it from a "Bonding Fics" list while following links from Snarry Digest at Insane Journal.

I have to agree with so many of your other reviewers.

From the first two chapters, your plotting and characteristation are very strong, but your grammar and spelling is absolutely horrid. If you would take a little more time with your writing and get a strong beta, you could really grow and improve your writing.

It is extremely rare for me to stop reading a story once I've started. As it is, I'm going to have to consider this story 'the one that got away'. Or at least not read it unless I'm so desperately bored that I'm willing to pour salt into open wounds for entertainment value.

This story is obviously very old, so one could hope that your writing has grown over time, but as a courtesy to your readers you might either a) warn that the spelling and grammatical errors are so extensive or b) remove the story until you've had a chance to revise it with a beta.

Or, of course, leave it as is and be satisfied with the mediocre result of what could probably be a very excellent story.

ooh! Snape's a fucker!! I hate him for causing poor harry somuch pain (this is for the ONLY YOURS chapter) GRR!!! And That wanker Malfoy too! Fuck them both! Harry should castrate them both!!!!!!

WHAT?! HArry forgave him that quicklY?! Just bc you say you love soemeone doesnt let you off the hooK!!! HE enjoyed it with Draco! He Shoudl be punished!!!! >:( You let him off hte hook too quickly!

This story was absolutely fantastic! I loved every word, thank you very much for posting :)