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by harriet

person chantalmalfoy
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

What\'s wrong with the baby? Why does he hurt? And how is he going to get away?

Please update again soon.
person antipyro
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am I on the edge of my chair or what!!!??? That was soooo good. Nice and \'angsty\', just the stuff to love and make up to, eh?

So how much does Draco torture Harry, or does he actually leave it to Voldemort? I really hope that Harry\'s child is o.k., that would be too much to take.

Chocolates, candy, fizzing wizzbees and all the sweets to you and your muses to write more and often.

You are truly a great writer. Very suscinct (sp?) but you get all the points in. Astounding!!! Marvelous!!! and of course very intriguing - in the most sexiest of ways.

Please......more.....sooon.
person fairyPoet
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!! MUST CONTINUE!!!!

YOur the best HP fanfic writer ever!
person nerak
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, snape totally lost his head from just that. c\'mon old man he\'s carrying YOUR baby. poor harry. and albus and co. were really not too careful about letting harry wonder around... where\'s moody when you need him? constant vigilance! guess at the end of the day draco won the lot!
person Wildfire
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow thouse three chapters were great! POOR Harry.... all alone and probably scared shitless.. Snape better hurry up and find him before Harry gets hurt! So what happened with the baby? Did he nearly leave it behind? Is the baby still ok? Jezze the poor kid getting cursed and nearly kicked out of the womb way before it\'s ready to come out. Harry had better find a way to protect that baby better or that baby won\'t be there much longer. Harry should get out of where ever he is on his own becasue he can take care of himself and he has done wandless magic before no matter how small he can do it so he should do it again and get the hell out of there! Or at least try.

Wildfire
person Chys
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! MORE! *hands hot chocolate to muses*
person Leila
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You promised smut and gave angst instead!!! :( NEEDS FLUFF NOW!!!

person Angel
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weeeiii more chappies!! I\'m so glad we got that git who copied your story! Stupid Severus... but it was kinda wierd that Harry didn\'t recognize Snape... And now his kidnapped. I do love your Draco in this one, his evil and smart but still same old Draco (egocentric) Lovely! More now please!
person Chrystal
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing! keep going!
person Aunt Bijou
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOoohhhh mercy! Mercy!! This is so intense! Do you know, in chapter 36, when Harry apparated to the field and Draco showed up, I actually had to stop reading?? My heart was pounding and it was just soooo stressful!! Aaahhhh, too much adrenaline! I love it!! Keep it up!!! Whew!!