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for Where Others Fear to Tread

by harriet

person Enydolus
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had better update this right away! Making us wait so long just to have you off our favourite greasy git is undeniably cruel.
person WitchbladeHell
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...! What?! No! Sev can\'t die! Aaaaaaaagggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (seriously, I\'m crying right now!)
person Remus\'s Girl
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK Sev needs to be ok, there has been entirely too much shit in your story where they are figureing things out then the baby and finally getting the relationship to a good spot. to kill him now not only sucks cause he is dead, i think in a way it is a bit of a let down and somewhat anticlimactic.
person padfoot
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no no no no ive been reading it for ages its not fair leaving him to bring a child up himself no way bring him back or make it bloody jasper im crule i know its not fair make sev survive it cant end like that read escape to me and life after lord voldermort they are good storys from hp fanficiton .net i think make somthing like that happen bring him back my poor sevvie i thought it was harry who was gonna die not sev but dont kill em what away to end a story.
person Mai Malfoy
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR...Need more plz. Twist what twist I don\'t need anymore twist damnit...grr...Its so good i cried when i read chapter 41 I don\'t cry plz write more. Love Ya Mai Malfoy(Beautiful Bad Faith)
person She-Who-Shall-Not-be-Named (for now)
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel the only way to truly express myself... Is through Song....

*hums the tune to a song from The Grinch Who Stole Christmas*

You\'re a mean one, Mrs. Riff.
You
person antipyro
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RELIEF!!!! Severus, not gone!!!! Yay!!!

I feel badly that Jasper didn\'t make it. He was a good character.

I really enjoyed all the other reviews, the song was priceless and I\'m waiting for you to change your name, lol.

Another sick little twist???? OH GODS! I\'m an emotional wreck. At least all our questions will be answered.

More candy and treats to write more, Please.
person She-Who-Shall-Not-be-Named (for now)
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Better. Much better! Poor Jasper; Nonetheless, great job. You\'ve escaped my wrath... this time...
person sak
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did and did not expect that Voldemort would show up, but Severus\'s sacrifice for Harry was both lovely and tragic. You sure know how to get a reader\'s attention!
person KELLY
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome poor sev poor harrry he needs hlep please continue soon sve cant die