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December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've read quite a few of your stories over the last couple of weeks. I just wanted to tell you that I have really enjoyed each of them. I saw a comment from you in one chapter about the fact that you were aware that there were some grammatical errors. You're right...sometimes you used the wrong word or something - but, you know what, it didn't stop me from enjoying your stories at all. You have done a wonderful job. Thank you for your time, talent and efforts. : ) Kat
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is so amazing!!!
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly loved this story. I usually don't read something with more then 20 chapters, but became hooked before I relised how many chapters there were and couldn't stop reading. Anyways ways Thank you. Sorry about the spelling and grammer
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I gave up. The grammar was too awful. Which is a shame, because there were a number of things about this story that were intriguing.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let u know that I have read quite a lot of stories on here and yours is the first that I have ever reviewed. I think u should go into writing professionally . This was the most fantastic story that I have ever read. And that is saying a lot.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story is good but the quality of the writing (grammar, word usage, etc.) is poor. The author is either not a native English speaker or is in 4th grade. Words like loose and lose, where and were, your and you're are consistently used incorrectly. Would greatly benefit from a beta. I came to this story from a link from painless_j's list, but were I her, I would remove it.
The story desperately needs editing.
The story desperately needs editing.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
fab story! i love it!
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
don't know if you'll ever see this, but amazing story! great depth of emotions and i love your spin on things. wonderful job :)
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
was a nice story. thanks for taking the time to write.
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Completely WONDERFUL - thank you so much!!! I'm sad that Draco had to die - but you wrote it fantastically. One of the BEST Snape/Harry pieces I have EVER read (and I have read thousands!!). Thanks!!