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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*deep breath*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*deep breath pant pant* you can\'t end it there......I HATE CLIFFIES!!!! and they were just getting into it..............
DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE DAMN YOU MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*deep breath*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*deep breath pant pant* you can\'t end it there......I HATE CLIFFIES!!!! and they were just getting into it..............
DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE DAMN YOU MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marvellous, stunning, spectacular!
Yes, I\'m saddened to have it ending so soon, but this is one of the better stories I\'ve ever read. Your mastery of the details and the little things you put in to make it all sound so real are what brings me back to your writing time and time again.
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
Yes, Draco and the remaining details to tie up. I\'ll have to re-read the first few chapters to see if I can spot any of the missed details.
Please put me on your list to send me the archive file. This is a keeper!
Please, make the week a short one to repost.
Candy and confections and all the sweet sugary stuff to make it a memorable ending. I hope you do have an epilogue, maybe making it into a prequel to the next story you write?????
Yes, I\'m saddened to have it ending so soon, but this is one of the better stories I\'ve ever read. Your mastery of the details and the little things you put in to make it all sound so real are what brings me back to your writing time and time again.
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
Yes, Draco and the remaining details to tie up. I\'ll have to re-read the first few chapters to see if I can spot any of the missed details.
Please put me on your list to send me the archive file. This is a keeper!
Please, make the week a short one to repost.
Candy and confections and all the sweet sugary stuff to make it a memorable ending. I hope you do have an epilogue, maybe making it into a prequel to the next story you write?????
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waiting for an update. I have been checking in at all my spare moments. waiting. waiting. waiting.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story. Please update soon.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying your story very much, but there are a number of things which let it down.
There is no \'o\' in Lucius. \'Death Eater\' and \'Dark Lord\' are always capitalized. In most cases their should be an apostrophe before the \'s\' in posessive nouns. eg. The boy\'s wand. Draco Malfoy could not possibly have been the Dark Lord\'s play-thing from the age of 10, because the Dark Lord was body-less and without his Death Eaters until until Harry\'s forth year at Hogwarts.
*shrugs*
You need a good beta. And wish you\'de get one, because this is a good story.
There is no \'o\' in Lucius. \'Death Eater\' and \'Dark Lord\' are always capitalized. In most cases their should be an apostrophe before the \'s\' in posessive nouns. eg. The boy\'s wand. Draco Malfoy could not possibly have been the Dark Lord\'s play-thing from the age of 10, because the Dark Lord was body-less and without his Death Eaters until until Harry\'s forth year at Hogwarts.
*shrugs*
You need a good beta. And wish you\'de get one, because this is a good story.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just found your story today! This is unbelievable. I am enjoying it immensely. I made myself stop at 14 to review, because I wnted to bash my head into a wall. I felt Harry\'s disappointment. What a let down! Some way to lose your virginity. I think you have the characterization of both people down pat.
As a senior beta and administrator for the Online Wizarding Library, I would LOVE to see your work archived with us, too. Please consider it. We\'re run by an extremely dedicated and enthusiastic staff, and our webmistress has turned the site into something truly staggering. We have an email alert system to notify your readers when your fic is updated, a review alert system to notify you when you have reviews, and a review reply function. There are also scores of other perks available here. Please do come have a look if you have a moment: http://owl.tauri.org
If you have further questions, please email me!
Again, I am absolutely enamoured. Now to read some more.
Rebecca
As a senior beta and administrator for the Online Wizarding Library, I would LOVE to see your work archived with us, too. Please consider it. We\'re run by an extremely dedicated and enthusiastic staff, and our webmistress has turned the site into something truly staggering. We have an email alert system to notify your readers when your fic is updated, a review alert system to notify you when you have reviews, and a review reply function. There are also scores of other perks available here. Please do come have a look if you have a moment: http://owl.tauri.org
If you have further questions, please email me!
Again, I am absolutely enamoured. Now to read some more.
Rebecca
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh? I like him, is he dead? And why is no one concerned he\'s dead? *cries for JJ* I actually thought if Sev were gone, Harry would get with JJ and make little JJbean spawn. XD
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I don\'t think I can find the right words to describe how much I\'m loving this story.
I don\'t usually read much slash, but I was rec\'d this by a friend and I\'ve just spent the last five hours literally glued to the screen. This is brilliant. I\'ve laughed, I\'ve cried, I\'ve screamed, and can I say you write both \'awkward sex\' and \'good sex\' incredibly well. I can\'t wait to see what the final twist is! One final note: the person who rec\'d this to me is Rebecca, who I believe reviewed earlier today and invited you to post on OWL. As another admin for that site, I\'d like to second that invitation and tell you we would be absolutely over the moon to archive your work! http://owl.tauri.org - I do hope you will consider it! Wonderful writing! You\'ve converted me to HPSS for good!
I don\'t usually read much slash, but I was rec\'d this by a friend and I\'ve just spent the last five hours literally glued to the screen. This is brilliant. I\'ve laughed, I\'ve cried, I\'ve screamed, and can I say you write both \'awkward sex\' and \'good sex\' incredibly well. I can\'t wait to see what the final twist is! One final note: the person who rec\'d this to me is Rebecca, who I believe reviewed earlier today and invited you to post on OWL. As another admin for that site, I\'d like to second that invitation and tell you we would be absolutely over the moon to archive your work! http://owl.tauri.org - I do hope you will consider it! Wonderful writing! You\'ve converted me to HPSS for good!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well I made it to this one and all I care to say is UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! I love your Harry Potter universe it\'s great! I want more!!!!! and maybe a sequel or two of wonderful smuttiness? plEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAse
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWW ! I reallyliked Severus\'s brother, but I\'m glad Severus wasn\'t killed.