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for Where Others Fear to Tread

by harriet

person xikum
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I love the concept. There are many small grammar/punctuation errors, but the story itself is quite enjoyable and creative!
person Moi
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! The world is righting itself after being turned upside down by polyjuice and experimental magic and all sorts of nutty stuff. I like how you\'ve fit the two of them together, and nobody changes personality all that much--Severus is still a jerk, Harry\'s still Harry. Severus crying in the bathroom was touching and true to character. I was sorry that Remus got killed. (Since the Veil, I\'m much more reconciled to Sirius going, but that was a bitter pill to swallow.) All in all, I don\'t feel like cussing you every other sentence, and I still look for updates here first. You did mention that you have more coming, right?
person Kelei
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, and have nothing to fault except how extremelly confused i am about the timeline. Anyway, i dont know how alerts work on this place... i assume you email? Yes? No? Maybe so? Well, CAN you email me when you update? Please? Pretty please? :D Ok, update soon!!
person Chys
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY AN UPDATE!
person Lils
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally!

I wondered, if you got a writers block...but luckily...nope^^

I really love your story, but just one question..

Why does Severus call Harry often \"Potter\".
I just think, that when they are married, it is a little bit...unpersonal?

Thanks for your story,
Lils :)
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh i love you so much. You are the best writer ever!!

person Phoenix 5
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good chapters. You\'r teasing Harry with the chocolate cake in front of him when he is forbiden to eat chocolate and that all of the others are eating something he would like very much. Will you made Harry hve some *envies* like odd meal like many pregnant persons have? I know how it is, I have 3 children.
I look foreward to read the next chapters Thanks (and I hope my english is not too bad ;-)
Phoenix 5
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Ooh I LOVE these last couple of chapters, their sweet and funny, just down right cute. Amazing Job. I cant wait to see what happens with the Baby and Draco. As well as hear more on this experimental magic and what else happened that night.

** Tons of Chocolate Frogs and Sugar Quills for you and your muse **

Love it! - Jessica
person GetOutOfMyHead
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FOUR! THERE WAS FOUR! I LOVE YOU! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH!

The Harry Potter GOF trailers start in theatres on May 13! Aren\'t you excited?! I\'m almost as excited for the movies as I am for the next book, or the movie itself! I have no life.

I\'M SO HAPPY!
person Kumori
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story ^.^
hurry up with another chapter please :D