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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you so much right now. I\'ve decided that you\'re not allowed to end it yet. My opinion is the only one that counts. You owe at least ten more chapters, simply because I said so. So there.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very satisfying read. I\'m looking forward to the birth.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, good chapters! I can\'t imagine that you\'ll have people spewing over this chapter. Personally, I\'ll be humming \'ding dong the witch is dead\' (maybe wizard?) all morning. Looking forward to more!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY STARS!
That was very exciting. (Where is the freaking paper bag when you need it?) You need a beta, but just for mechanics and spelling/homophone issues. The rest was just terrific! Hurrah!
That was very exciting. (Where is the freaking paper bag when you need it?) You need a beta, but just for mechanics and spelling/homophone issues. The rest was just terrific! Hurrah!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Hermione had gone to university, studying to be a code breaker like Bill.\"
Over enthusiastic spell check or cypher for \'Curse Breaker\'? ;)
Over enthusiastic spell check or cypher for \'Curse Breaker\'? ;)
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon great chapter
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yay DIE Draco DIE! That was brilliant! Harry should have listened to Sev and stayed in their rooms, gun in hand. lol ... loved it, and i cannot wait for the BABY to come!!! Ooh so exciting!
- Jessica
- Jessica
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, action packed! Looking forward to the final two chapters and any other stories you write
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww I do love Draco normally but not so much your Draco which is good because yay I loved the way Harry killed him, such a fantastically written battle. And oooh the baby is coming, I\'m all over excited.
Hugs
Kat
Hugs
Kat
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes a very sweet death, Draco didn\'t deserve to die so easily after what he put Harry through before. And now, the deflected curse has hit Severus. Please make him live, at least until the child is born, which according to any labour pains I know of, won\'t be too long in coming. Hopefully, the deflected curse isn\'t a killing blow, *hint, hint, hint.*
I really liked the broom flight, very descriptive. I never realized that if the broom bristles weren\'t there, the broom couldn\'t fly. I guess it\'s just like airplane wings. I just figured that brooms were magically empowered to fly, regardless of their construction and the brooms aerodynamics used only for speed and control functions. Maybe it\'ll be featured in a future fic, which I\'m very glad you\'re working on already. Oh, the anticipation.
Thank you for two excellent chapters. Boo Hoo that there are only two remaining chapters. I love this fic.
I really liked the broom flight, very descriptive. I never realized that if the broom bristles weren\'t there, the broom couldn\'t fly. I guess it\'s just like airplane wings. I just figured that brooms were magically empowered to fly, regardless of their construction and the brooms aerodynamics used only for speed and control functions. Maybe it\'ll be featured in a future fic, which I\'m very glad you\'re working on already. Oh, the anticipation.
Thank you for two excellent chapters. Boo Hoo that there are only two remaining chapters. I love this fic.