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for Where Others Fear to Tread

by harriet

person nesscafe
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! I wouldn\'t change a thing. I\'ll read it again I\'m sure because it was so good! You did a wonderful job of weaving this tale. I can\'t believe how these characters progressed and oh how adorable was Alex!? PLEASE drop me an email if you write something else! I MUST read it too! You\'re an excellant writer!
person mirestelfea
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Wow that was good, loved the ending, just so sad that it is finally done. Congrats, this is one story to remember and reread again. *huggles* Let me know if you have anything go up.
person antipyro
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Just absolutely wonderful!

Yes, you had to kill Draco. There was no way he could have lived in the same world as Harry, Severus and Alexander James.

Hermione and Ron dated for 6 years before announcing their wedding?????? Wow, that\'s a long time. Hermione wanted a career first, right?? You said that being a curse/code breaker was hard to do, afterall.

Dumbledore, skiing!!!! Did he ever find the lemon drop factory and where was it???? I\'m sure he\'d keep tabs on Hogwarts with Minerva and of course his favourite two boys and their son. This was the first birth at Hogwarts, right?????

Too bad we don\'t know what kind of aptitude AJ has for magic. Don\'t they show something by age 6? Afterall, he\'s in the best environment for it. It would be funny to learn of his early attempts at levitating stuff, low level flying, transfiguring things into play items and such. Maybe he would make a pet of the giant squid in the lake. lol

Yes, the story was long, but I hungrily read all of it, squeeling with delite at the posting of another chapter or two. Your depictions of the everyday things that go on while the story evolved made this the work of art it is. Your attention to all the details, written in a fashion that made it very easy to follow and understand, even the complicated parts, is the skill and glory that will bring me back to your work.

Congratulations on a fine piece of literature. I hope that you may publish one day and do make money on your passion. Enjoy your respite. You\'ve more than deserved it.
person CaN-oF-DoOM
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, and i\'m sad to see it go. i have stuck with this plot bunny sense chanpter 20. to make up for finishing this one, i\'m affraid you will have to make a lovely story with just the same amout of that easy lovin\' feelin\'

-- NoirRouge
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO! BRAVA! Ooh I LOVED THIS FIC! You did an amazing job Riffraff, and i cant wait to read more from you.

I love your character of Alex, he\'s adorable. The last two chapters were some of my favorite, I love the last one. It was so cute and funny, \' Got his fingers stuck in a potion bottle\' ha! That was adorable!

Amazing, BRILLIANT job! Love it so much!

- Jessica
person Becky
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story. Loved the dynamics between Severus & Harry. Good writing.
person jess
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was perfect, killing Draco didnt do the story any harm and it made for an excellent ending, i really will miss this story but im glad i know how it all turned out
thanks for writing some great reading material lol
person Mai Malfoy
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it you are truely an inspired author. I look forward to your next story. Love Ya Mai Malfoy (Beautiful Bad Faith)
person felmyst
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!! Really Enjoyed!! Looking forward to future stories!!
person dragonclaw21974
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful fic. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job.