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for Do you love me?

by TaintedAnjel

person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very poignant! I like the way you placed so much emotion into a short chapter. It gave it a more realistic touch, and kept you focused on the sadness being felt, rather than too many descriptions. I would love to read more about this!
person divine angel (not logged in)
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Please update, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
person anon
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Saying *their* goodbyes, not \"there\".
person Arabella
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I definitely can see some tears in my future. I got a little choked up over the first chapter, which is probably good news for you.
I don\'t like to see Sevvie sad. You made him sad.
Bad T.A., LOL.
Good writing, though. Keep at it.
Next chapter, please. :D <3
person serena
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed..i hope you will continue...thanks...
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh way too sad....
person Ladyevilfaerie
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I loved the beginning very much please update soon. I will wait patiently for your next chapter. TTFN, SAYOONARA.