rate_review Reviews

The story has been fairly well written except for one word - DRUG. In the context given the word should be DRAGGED or DRAG. According to the dictionary DRAG = 1 to haul or pull something or someone along with difficulty; 2 To search a watercourse with grappnels etc; 3 to allow ones tail to trail along the ground; 4 Womens clothing worn by males; whilst DRUG = 1 a medical substance; 2 a narcotic, hallucinogen or stimulent, esp. one causing addiction.

Sorry but yours was the upteenth story with this bit of bad English and its irritating as it destroys the stories flow.

Mandy,
Victoria
Australia

Aw, this is right on hon, I love this sort of writing. The only thing I would have you do is fool around with Harry\'s actions more. Like many addicts have these twitchy things that they do, or like they can\'t make their hands stop shaking. And I also think that if Harry had been abused for so long, he\'d have his own little quirks, like talking in a child\'s voice whenever he thought he was in trouble, or having some kind of childish behavior around grown men since he wasn\'t able to develope into an adult on the account of him being abused.
Anyway, good on ya and please update soon.

Eagerly awaiting more! Absolutely love it! Though would like it if the chapters were a tad longer

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Interesting. ^^ I like it so far. I hope you update soon.

Oh yay! Love it! can\'t wait for more! Poor Harry!

Wow. O_O You updated quickly. I just reviewed about 30 minutes ago,I think. XD
Strangly,I can see Harry playing a guitar.I\'ve never thought about it before,but now I can see it.
HA! Snape\'s a sneaky one,he is. XD Going around \"observing\" the students. XD And I want to say thank you for not making Sev just jump out and stop Harry shooting up. ^^ Him going to Dumbledore with the info seems much more believable. ^^
Great chap. Update soon! ^^

Nice start, too bad the first chapter was so short. You have a great writing style, easy to understanding and encompassing nice little details. I\'ll be watching for updates.