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by ktthemighty

person Dominic Shade
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter hon, so good infact....I have nothing to say! lol. Good on ya and keep up the good work. I\'m really proud of your work here.
-Dom
person Dominic Shade
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good update hon, but I\'m not sure if you should make Albus know about Harry being mistreated, it just seems to me that he would act on that as soon as he could. And just remember to keep Harry child-like when around older males, especiallt around Snape, not so much Dumbledore, he might even be sort of sexual toward Snape since that\'s the only kind of love he would know about. But remember to take that carefully, only after Harry knows that Snape saw his life should he act like that. And when he\'s denied of such \'love\' by Snape, he should become even more child-like or go completely into \'I need drugs now\' mode. You\'ve opened up some very interesting turns in this story and I\'ll review and help when I can.
Feel free to email me if you need a beta reader or someone to discuss ideas with, I\'m an excellent muse.
The only other thing I feel the need to comment on is the length of chapters, lol. I really like this story and I can\'t wait to read more.
Good times and rock on
-Dom-
person Ru-Shin
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! ^^ Harry smells clean now! XD And he was rescued! ^o^ Can\'t wait for the next chapter!! And by the way! I liked the floo powder idea. ^^
person Jessica
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg this story is incredible, please continue updating it
person Killergirl
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON OR I WILL KILL YOU
KIDDING JUST UPDATE SOON WILL YAH???????????????????????
person not telling
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! the story is brilliant:) it\'s viceless ! Please continue asap cause i can\'t wait till harry will be saved, and seeing him suffering it makes you want to cry, but you just cant stop reading... Please update asap:)
person Eowynselixure
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ayy I like it! Please please please continue!

*Eowyns elixure
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. ^^ Please update soon! I hope Harry gets rescued soon as well...:(
person Dominic Shade
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good on ya luv, happy to see you took my advice and such. This is turing out to be a great story, keep up the good work. And how come Dumbldork wouldn\'t know? That bat usually knows everything? Though I guess it doesn\'t matter really. I can\'t wait to see what Snape does when he finds out about Potter, maybe he adopts him? Though that is pretty far-fetched...I guess I\'ll be leaving it up to you then, lol. Good times and rock on.
-Dom
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Question: Why wouldn\'t anyone notice the needle marks on Harry\'s arms? Does Harry use a concealer spell? Anyways, keep up the great work, and update soon!