rate_review Reviews

That was cute...arguing with chess pieces.

I just love those chess pieces. keep up the good work.

You\'re doing so well luv, I\'m glad that you\'ve taken all my advice. All I have to say this time is: UPDATE FASTER!!! lol, thanks for the good read.

I really like your story. And the chess pices! That was just brilliant! I don`t think I`ve ever laught so much of a fic before......

Aww that was so cute and funny at the same time with Snape and the ladies XD ha! I never thought him to be a ladies man hehe. It would be so cute to see him like that, surrounded by women and not knowing what to do. I love it please keep it going

Aww , please update soon I love it

I love you. o.o Update afore I die. *cling*

Aww,poor Harry. V_V And poor Snape,because he\'s having to control himself. Yet another awsome chapter. ^^ Can\'t wait to read more!

Well written, but ultimately cliche. Cliche Cliche Cliche.

I\'ve been waiting for an update from you. This was extremely well written, luv. Just don\'t forget that when Snape asks Harry about rape, the boy should go into instant child mode. Doing things like giggling and wanting to play, anything really to distract himself from remembering. Maybe when Snape even asks Harry, the boy wants to show him instead, or something. I also think that you should continue with the one on one thing you have with Harry and Snape, keep it in the Holidays so that there\'s no outside influence from friends, because I doubt very much Harry could be around people for very long without panicking. But this was a great update and I look forward to seeing more from you soon.
-Dom