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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello!!
Well...what did I think? what did I think? I thought it was very fun and innocent and playful (can a story be those things) I do think that Hermionie is a little out of character (the writing in the journal seems a little childish but mysbe its just that she is so giddy in love that she is being like that??) Its definitly not a critisism!! Not in anyway!! I am enjoying the story so far and cant wait for Snape to make his snarky entrance!!! :-)
I hope that u update soon!! I will be following this story closely!!
TaintedAngel xxx
Well...what did I think? what did I think? I thought it was very fun and innocent and playful (can a story be those things) I do think that Hermionie is a little out of character (the writing in the journal seems a little childish but mysbe its just that she is so giddy in love that she is being like that??) Its definitly not a critisism!! Not in anyway!! I am enjoying the story so far and cant wait for Snape to make his snarky entrance!!! :-)
I hope that u update soon!! I will be following this story closely!!
TaintedAngel xxx
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. How could Ron do that to Hermione? How long has he been cheating? Plus, Harry obviously knew it was going on. Hermione was almost acting as if she were under a spell. Did Ron spike her pumpkin juice over the summer? And the backlash is about to hit the fan. Great opening chapter! ~Innogen
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love where this is going not her pain but the story line. update fast so i can indulge myself some more