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for Unity

by belladonnacordial

person cottoncandy
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story, Update soon!
person Yana
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that is soo sweet
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was nice. A side of their relationship that makes me laugh and smile! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been a bad reader lately and haven\'t bothered to review. The plot is moving a little too fast for my liking, but that\'s just me liking things that take time to build as opposed to going along rather fast. Well, I\'m kinda on the phone with my sister, so I\'ll comment more later.

CP the hungry
person fragonknight01
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 9 and 10 were really quite good. I like what you are doing here.
Arwen Rayne
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I want that bed! Way cool! I can\'t wait for chapter 10!
person Yana
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww there was no fluff in that chapter
person sak
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, very unique bed.
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic. Quick revies make awesome too and it even has a good plot. But that\'s not saying muchcoming from me, since I\'ve just been reading PWP\'s.

Pheonix,
When all else fails, blame the flying monkeys.
person Lain Liffith
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEK.


Wonderful plot, really extraordinary. I loved how everything really made sense, and the magic tests! When Draco said, \"You and I are the only people in Hogwarts school who have not been tested.\" I got a chill, it really clicked there. Oh and the sex was extremely hot. Draco is so irresitable. I can only imagine his reaction to Harry\'s reply with the crystal (could you write that for me, oh PLEASE! it would be so hot to see Draco lose control) and then we he came in and was like FINALLY and made out. Oh god, its just simply amazing. And the witty banter is highly entertaining.


-- lain liffith