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by belladonnacordial

person moi
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter. it is, in my opinion, the best thing that you have ever written. it got very philosophical at times, and was very draco. i loved it, please update.
~moi
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter 14! I love this Draco! Dark and Light all in one. Fantastic!
person gabby
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was your best work yet. visually emotional, beautiful. keep it up.
person Yana
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahah Draco is really possessive of Harry
person swampthang
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention I really want that bed? Narcissa threw food? Holy moly! So does that mean she likes Harry? What will she train them in? I can\'t wait for the next chapter! You must hurry with chapter 14!
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can\'t do that! That\'s is cruel and evil! Evil! You can\'t stop in the middle of a lemon! There should be laws against that.

Pheonix,
EVIL!
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you\'re hitting on bondage and control and all that fun stuff...my absolute favorite kinks. Write the next chapter now, dammit, or else I\'ll be too frustrated to think of what else I was going to comment on. Oh yeah, I don\'t like your Narcissa. Meant to say that last time, but I have a hard time believing that Draco\'s parents would accept the possibility of him being gay, much less the thought of him and Harry being together.

CP the sore
person Yana
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahhahahahahaaha poor Harry
person fifespice
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
malfoy is a sex maniac isn\'t he