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for Unity

by belladonnacordial

person thrnbrooke
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 16!
person Missi
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am officially jealous. I\'ve never broken a bed that way. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next, or Snape\'s reaction!
person niamh
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyy! its lemon licker 69 from FF.net, preettyy please update?!
person Lisa
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job on this! I loved his destructive orgasm. Hehe. Can\'t wait to see if that happens again.
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry broke the bed? Holy moly! How? I can\'t wait to see if Severus knows the answer and what it might be!
person carmenluego
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exceptionally well written this story is. I really am enjoying it much. I like your version of Draco and Harry. They have great chemistry together, and compliment eachother well. I\'m glad Draco has grown up. Interesting devices- the memory crystal, Draco\'s bed, and I just love the Time Turner Cafe (why can\'t I get a job there and look younger every day?) Very clever you must be. While the sex scenes are just beautiful, the emotional aspects and the plot, make this very satisfying to read. In the last chapter, St. George and the Dragon reference made me laugh a lot. What no sheep? I don\'t guess Draco would tell that part. That\'s another thing I really love, THE HUMOUR! Am placing on recs right now
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful lemon. Now that it\'s finally finished! Hilarious aftermath. I like that. \"The Orgasm That Broke the Bed,\" that is funny stuff! There is no reason for modesty on that one. I should like give you a dollar or something.

Pheonix,
I just spent the last 11 hours beating on a few people in Dynasty Warriors 4.
person dedmun
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories i\'ve read on here. totally love the plot and all the stuff in it. the bed was a great idea, and i really enjoyed it\'s story. so happy you post so fast. keep up the great writing, and post again soon.
person Yana
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaha poor harry
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What kind of sick and twisted mind can you possibly have? THAT WAS THE SAME CHAPTER BUT IN A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW!!! Still left in th middle of a lemon. Still leaving me unsatisfied. Still making me want to attack you. Grrrrrrr. Next chapter, now! And it better be a good lemon if you\'re gonna put me and the other reviewers through this! Blah!

Pheonix,
You are more boring than,how you say hellaaaa, Clay Aiken\'s Christmas Album.
-Persian Tow Truck Man to John Kerry (Mad TV 10th season)