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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
K, i looove veela-Draco stories and I WANT NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I like it so far. Make sure you update soon! Also, it would be easier to read if you put an extra line between paragraphs. Otherwise, no complaints. Good job! ^_^
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, here\'s a review. I want to know what happens next!!! Please? Purty Please?? Please? *whining and stamping foot in impatience*
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up. I want to read more. Great start.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was good! I don\'t review very often but since yuo asked so nicley. I just hope you write a second chapter!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love Veela fics! Especially when Harry is Draco\'s mate! I can\'t wait for chapter 2. Did Madame Pomfrey explain things to Harry? Does he know yet? Oh this is wonderful! Draco didn\'t know he\'d gone into heat?
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do you need help? It\'s going smooth uptill now. Like your story, has a lot of potential. Now, on to the smut!