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for Instincts of Love

by Laceyp

person Artemis Adriane
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like where this is going so could you please update soon. I love the plot, Veela Draco with Mate Harry is great! And I really like the way you write. Update soon PLEASE...!
person Sepharin
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it how it is, very nice. Keep goin ^-^
person Zentiis
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should definatly try and salvage the story, it has good potential, i like the idea of ron stirring up trouble, but go whatever way suits you. Please Continue!!!
person Demitria Miriam
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. I hope your comp starts working soon! I want more!
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I keep hoping there is more! Please continue!
person beccaroo
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to finish this chapter and write the second and third. and hopefuly you can finish this because this story is good so far
person Sofie
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You might be a beginner, but it sounds like you\'ve got a realy good idea....

Please update soon... :D

Love Sofie
person morgie
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, I hope you wright more chapters. it was a litlle short but i liked it. bye keep up the work
person Azhrille
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s not often that I read a story with only one chapter unless I know its a one shot. Your story is pretty good. Could you use a little but more detail, I was a little confused at one part. Still I would say good job with it. Being new is alway hard. Keep it up and remember no matter what anyone says; Nothing is stupid if you write it down.
person Kitkat Bar
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way the story is leading so far. Keep it up, i would like to read more.