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for The Uneventful Story

by SnowflakeImp

person Lamb_Chops
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I adore you!!!!!!!
I absolutely love your writing style, it
person carolyn
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've no more nails left after biting them while reading this chapter, and now I've been reduced to doing so to my toenails! (Gross.) So what was that about Hermione's fitful sleeping? Or her static mentality refusing to let go of the past. OH YES I KNOW! A hint! *eats them up like bread crumbs* Woman, they're one in a million and you've a need to be more generous!
Give us more chapters and I swear your loyal readers will gobble them up like so. We're like freaking iron filings to your magnet. Come on!
person kazfeist
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's great so far....some niggly subject/verb congruences, and singular/plural stuff, but I LOVE the plotline so far....so Purging takes lots of memories, does it? Can't wait for the reveal!
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I must say - I LOVE it! I read it all in one sitting. But, now I;m sad because I have to wait for your next update...=(. How far apart are your updates?? The story doens't doesn't seem very dark on the surface but I love all the bubbling darkness underneath. It isn't too dark is it?? I suspect Draco has...done something to Hermione in the past. Put her under a spell? Also, I suspect they were lovers and I also think he manipulates her mind on occassion? Hmmmm...and I am VERY curious about the hints of a Purge. Like a whole bunch of people got their memory erased after the war and that's why she can't quite rememebr what Malfoy did to her? Is she still under some kind of spell and is that why men can't really see her?? What's going on!!!!! I can't wait.

And, please, please throw our girl Granger a bone! Send her off to Prague instead of that stupid dance where she'll only be more depressed and/or look stunning and sweep everyone off their feet (and wouldn't that be predicatble?). Get her to Prague where she can finally meet someone that sees her beauty! And maybe that guy could help raise the jealous ire of Draco? And possibly Harry??

Oh Lord, what's going on!!!! Please update soon.
person kazfeist
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, another wonderful chapter...Mindee is the mole, right? If you want a beta, I'll be happy to oblige! Cheers!
person firewall
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione dealing with Draco's flirtations. When do you think she'll figure it out? LOL But I hope she doesn't let herself be pulled into Grace's clutches. He lost hs chance and he reminds me of Lockhart...perish the thought.

I'm a little concerned about her nightmare, especially when I thought back earlier in the story to the voice whispering in her ear while no one was there. Sounds ominous to me. You also have a couple of characters running around that have unsavory undertones.

I love Ron here and it's good that Harry is back in the picture. I hope she can talk to one of them. Your take on their relationship was well written as was the response of Ginny and Lavendar to their closeness. Well done.
person Kit
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! Please update soon!!! I loved every second of it, so keep going
person Chrissiemie
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is very well written and clever. I am praying that Hermione changes her style and life around in time to blow people away and show what a fantastic, cool natured person she can be.
person Lizard
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can't wait for more. The banter between D and H is amazing. More soon please!
person Tarae
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I found myself at work wondering what was to come in hte future, and I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out!