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for The Uneventful Story

by SnowflakeImp

person Cappuccino
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm truly enjoying this light-hearted fic. And I must say that I'm truly drawn by Hermione's nightmare...What in the world was that? Continue with this delight!
person Lrndng
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO good!! I havent read this story in a while and it's just still as funny as the first time ... applause
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon. i love this story. it seems it may be important to my mental well-being that you update soon. please
person Barney
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a most enjoyable find of a story. It does remind me of Temporary Insanity in its humour and attractive portrayal of D&H. I love the bit about the cufflinks and the exchange of food. Really hilarious and touching. Look forward to more.
person Heather
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please update! It's absolutely fabulous, the best new fic i've read in awhile. so please write more, it would make me very happy :-)i'm just waiting to hear about their steamy past...
person Bad_Kitty_Cat
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated in a short notice!! Brilliant as always... although I feel more and more sorry for poor Hermione, I mean... why can't she have a small moment of happiness? she's heading for suicide-ville she is! Somebody help this poor thing!

Ok, this strange dream segment, Draco's comment and other details got me thinking (for once)... So we're entering the weird mind of one of your avid readers: Did she agree to be obliviated and that's why all those images haunt her? Did something really really bad happen to her in a Death Eather attack? (many different hands touching her) Did somebody "save" her... somebody with a strange obsession with her... let's say Draco for example? (the sheets on the bed were expensive... must be a Malfoy's... wait! Lucius? no no no... Draco). And then there is the attitude of Malfoy towards Harry when he was massaging Hermione on the couch... gloating... why gloating? And Harry's uberprotective response? Did they use to be involved? Was he obliviated (too)?

Ok, thinking about it... Hermione must have memory problems... what's with the "You're a lioness" thing? How can she not remember somebody who tells you that?! And the "there's no man for her out there" comment!? don't tell me she's jinxed... Malfoy did it? wanker! Hmmmm... and let's not mention the almost massochistic attitude that miss Granger has when dealing with her money... And my final thought is, Hermione is not as much of a virgin as she thinks she is.

So there you go, a lot of ramblings... shows you were people's minds are going (mine at least :-P). You know, I noticed something that has nothing to do with the storyline itself... that you don't do character descriptions... I mean, yes we know that Draco is handsome and flamboyant while Hermione is rather frumpy... but the other people stay in quite a "blur"... you give small details (like how gorgeous they are etc) but never quite precisse. I wonder if it's on purpose or not. I mean, I could be envisioning Alex Grace like a blond fat Lord Farquaad (from Shrek 1) and it wouldn't clash with the story at all!

Keep up the good work and update soon!! Or I shall invoque the wrath of the squirrels... and squirrels are mighty scary! Toodledoo: Bad_Kitty_Cat
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story. please please update soon
person ^.^Cat
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I LOVE this story!!! I'm so happy you updated so quickly. I almost feel bad for Hermione, she really does get the short end of the stick. I wonder when things will go up for her. Can't wait for the next part!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay update! I loved it! Please please don't make the fic dark though, well or at least let it have a happy ending. I like the Draco and Hermione fights and can't wait to see what happens next. More soon! Great Writing!
person AnItA
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...itz been awhile since youve updated....but it was sooo waorth it!!!!....u r really talented and i will just encourage you to please keep writing....ok write fast...faster...sorry just hope i see another update before i go 2 work (mon-afternoon)....o0o0o please update...yes i am begging...:-p