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Hmmm, sorry, don't buy it. After how utterly HORRID they were to each other, it's too fast, unjustified. Also, the characterisations aren't rock solid.

hey. just wanted to say the story is awsome. and it's def. cool how hermione and malfoy have a hot/cold relationship...well mostly cold/colder relationship. keep up the awsome work!

As long as you keep the repartee going between Hermione and Draco, it's not a problem. Make it light, make it darker. I don't care as long as you keep them going.

I love this fic. And you know what? I think it'll be just fine if it gets a little dark. You need a balance. Please update soon! I'm dying to see who gets Hermione!!! (Blaise, or Draco? Hmm..)

More more more!!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione takes the stage!!!!

Oh you're just evil for splitting it into two parts (but with great timing though). It really just makes my day to see this fic updated, it's just lovely and funny and Hermione is such an endearing character. Hmmm, who will get Hermione from the auction? I think Blaise should, let Draco stew for a little while. But I wonder when her flashbacks will really come out. Who kidnapped her? And what's with the pink incident? Oooooh I want to know! *sigh* but I suppose I'll just have to wait for the update. Oh btw, you really should try and put this fic up on the Coloured Grey d/hr archive. And good luck with the job hunting! ^.^

Great story!

So here is some of my thoughts on what I think may happen. (This is probably going to sound totally crazy..but that's okay, this is only one of my many personalities talking) So I believe that Draco may have done something..not..so good to Hermione (or something like that). Why do I believe this? Because you wrote that Harry had a strange feeling about Malfoy when he, Malfoy, was rubbing Hermies temples. Harry felt the urge to protect Hermie (im too lazy to write Hermione, so pardon me) from Draco, even though he didn't know why (why else would he feel that way?). Also, I believe that Blaise knows about this...And Blaise is a crazy mo'fo (not really, well maybe, but I felt that my predictions would be inadequate without saying someone was crazy...makes me feel better)..Also..I believe Mindee may be a factor in Hermie learning more about Drakies feelings for her (awwwwwwww...doesnt that sound cute!) But yeah, I also believe that peoples were obliviated because more than just warfare was waged during the epic battle ( DUN DUN DUN...)...

But anyways, GREAT story, me likie story..me likie story (...from family guy...don't ask questions)

I hope you continue to write often! Makes me all excited...




(On a more personal note, I am very tired...So if I am completely wrong about everything I said, or I appear to be just a slight bit crazy....We can all just blame it on delusions caused by lack of sleep....Yeah..sounds about right...)

I have to say that I am in looooooove (see how many o's are in there? this is like hardcore!) with your writing. You are totally awesome (and by totally awesome, I mean totally sweet) at giving hints and clues but still making it difficult to predict all at the same time! I have a feeling about how dark this story may get, and it makes it even more exciting! I REALLLLY hope you update again soon! When I first came to AFF (like a year ago) YOUR story was one of the first ones I read, and I immediately fell in love with it. I kind of went out of my Potter Stage for awhile, but the other day I came back and I saw that you had updated quite a bit (in fact I only came back to see if you had updated or not)...And let me tell you...I am back in the Potter Stage again. I have also read The Politicians Wife, and Temporary Insanity...And I love them both too! But your fic is my favourite because you keep it so funny (I luff it!)...Anywho...This is like my once in a while groupie message that I sometimes get the urge to write, and hey, its to you! So yeah...keep the good shtuff coming...

And if there are anymore post-hogwarts D/Hr fics you want to recommand, I'd be TOTALLY grateful!

Thanks!

Hello!

I must say that I LOOOVE your story!!! I think it's really good. You said some people have figured out what's going to happen but I totally haven't. I have no idea what's going to happen and that's why I love it. The dialogue between Hermione and Draco is great and it's not awkward or anything. Like those fanfics you read that everything is too rushed (like you jump from point a to point c) and the things that are happening don't seem like they would ever happen. But your fanfic is the complete opposite of that!
I also read the Politician's Wife like you suggested and I liked it. But you know what? I like yours even better!! I'm so happy you've been updating so fast! Thank you soo much for doing that and I hope you keep it up. I can't wait to see the chapter about the party and what's going to happen after that!
Great great fanfic! I think it's brilliant!

Bye
-Cutiek