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A good author can never have enough reviews thats why I donate this to you. 1) Your story rocks. 2) The foreshadowing is noted by any good to excellent reader, it was not in vain. 3) The characters are mostly in character, anything out has been addressed. That in it self deserves a reward, here,
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omg i luv ur story everything is fantastic ur fantastic plz do keep it up

Yay! I come back from my hollidays to realise that you updated thrice!

I'm glad to see that Hermione is a bit happier... if only a bit... Oh and in french... although "connasse" litterally means whore it's more often used to describe a stupid woman rather than a slutty one. The exact translation would be "saloppe", or if you want something a tad lighter "pouffiasse". Charming beginning for a review, I know... can't beat it with a stick!

I really love the way in which the story is developping. And I entirelly agree with the non-fluff part... Hermione's and Draco's relation reminds me of a tango... harsh, passionate and sometimes violent... For the moment they are only begining to circle one another ;)

Ok, I will spam you with my theories once again, see what they tell you...

I don't really like Blaise, even before the gala dance scene there's something just NOT right... and thinking back to Hermione's dream with the silk sheets... I think he was the guy at the door, not Malfoy. I mean, when Hermione was at the library... she felt as if somebody was watching her... and then Blaise appeared out of nowhere. Maybe I'm just being paranoid but that small detail makes me think that there's something fishy in Zabini-land, he acts more like a stalker in the making.

Then there's the relationship between Malfoy and Blaise, two bougeois that almost grew together and used to be in the same group of friends... one would think that these two would get along just fine. Yet, in the begining... Draco reacts in a somewhat leery way towards Blaise, as if he didn't like him at all, why? Dunno, must be the voices inside my head...

Then there's that other flash-back with Harry and Ron, who act soooo unlike the guys that they were in the story up to now... My guess is that Hermione just went into a mission, she fucked it up and got caught by the death eaters. But the way those two behave is just so strange, don't know what to think, it's just weird... don't know what to think about it, yet...

And Malfoy is just stupid, he doesn't wan't to be with Hermione but at the same time he wants nobody else to be with her... Asking the reason for letting her hair down... ha! it's the primal "oh no she met someone" fear. And he better not be using that hair he plucked from Hermione for some pervy thing like polyjuice smut! The fact that he knows that she has a diary is rather disturbig... just like his eye's changing colour...

I think that's all for now. Oh and Mindee's hair dye and inner mussings: genious! Can't wait for some more pieces to fit into this puzzle... so update soon! Or I shall unleash the wrath of the Nights Who Say... ni!

Ta-ta!

Bad_Kitty_Cat

i loved it! and i want to kill harry and ginny >_< aaahhhhh

This is brilliant...heh...Harmione uses the same technique I do when my minions--friends--classmates are mad...well, I don't have a desk full of candy, but I just throw stuff in the air, like, paper and another light things that aren't potientially dangerous.

Good, very good! Update soon, please.

This story should be gold. Terry Pratchett.

oh my god pleeeeaaaase update soon! i can't wait for him to stop being so stupid and JUST KISS HER!!! it's not that hard draco! what a silly boy. i love you for writing this story; it really just keeps getting better. :-)

I have been in love with this story from the start and never thought it would get finished. So finally I fell across it tonight, and saw how far along you have gotten, I am so happy.

And damn if I can't wait for the smut, I hope I don't have to wait for too long.

What a fascinating story! What on earth is going on? So much intrigue, keep it coming as fast as you can.

Why is it that every time I see you've updated I go into a happy little conniption? Serioulsy. This is one of my fav HP stories of all time. (I know I say that every review, but it's true.) And can I just say that I canNOT wait for the SMUT!! Yay!!

I loved the bidding war on Hermione, and Harry and Ron's last minute save. It's seems like Blaise is somehow involved as well (getting lost in a memory, knowing something abut Draco's past, studying Hermione). Did he have a thing with Hermione as well before the mass Obliviation? I also love, LOVE the tension between Harry and Draco. He (harry) gets so sexy when he's like that. mrow. Please say the smut will be between Draco and Hermione. Please. Was he using Legilimens (sp?) on her? Reading her mind? It's seemed for a moment things were being revealed. Did Draco not get his memory erased? He is so so mean to her because he's trying to cover up what he so obviously feels?

You are a brilliant writer. Very talented. You keep your tone throughout. Even in this somewhat lighthearted chapter there is still that dark sense under everything just bubbling under the surface. Brilliant.

And thank you for putting so much time into this and getting better with your updates. I think your readers appreaciate it greatly! I can't even describe how ridiculously thrilled I myself get.

Looking forward to more (especially smut)