rate_review Reviews

loved it, and knew i would, b/c you're a very talented author. and i am amazed that you can just sit down and have 24 pages written in the matter of one night. amazed i tell you. when ive got an idea, takes me a few days to get the entire chapter out and right in my mind. anywho -- im curious as to where blaise falls into place... hmm. dunno. i guess i'll just wait and find out! absolutely cannot wait til the next installment. happy writing!

Stilted? No. Boring? No. Stupid expositions and boring explanations? Shut your mouth. This happens to be one of my favorite stories, if not for the fact that it's well written and supremely entertaining, it's damn funny.

First of all, transition chapters are necessary, so don't beat yourself up if you're not as happy with this chapter as you'd like. As much as everyone loves PWP, a good *story* takes a lot more. Annnd, I like where this story is going, but I hope that you keep the humour in all the chapters, even if they're steadily becoming darker. This story has made me laugh, giggle, snicker, a myriad of other expressions of glee, and of course, total joy at the lovely smut we finally got-hooray for closet scenes. Seriously, keep it up. And yes, dirty pun intended.

**And I love Hermione's obsession with cuff links. I too adore all things sparkly. x3**

Yay you finally updated and all i can say is wow! This is offically my favorite HG/DM story to date it is so enteratining and it keeps me on the edge of my seat. Im really looking forward to hermione and draco hooking up for real. This story is so good please update really soon!

Nicola

YAY! ::Bounces:: Finally more! I like it, I really do. I was a little worried when you said things were going to be getting darker, but if the little tidbits of dark in this chapter were anything to go by, then it's the kind of dark I like. As long as there's some random funny stuff, I'll love it. ...I mean, honestly. The arguments are absolutely priceless. Nya! Later!

Dear Snowflakeimp:

Don't make me beg you to write more. This story is fantastic - I literally check this site daily to see if it's been updated. I was so excited today when it was! I'm waiting with giddy anticipation for this uneventful story to unfold. I don't think I've ever read a fic that's been so appropriately misnamed (as in, keep the title!). Anyway, I know how hard it is to churn out chapter after chapter, so take your time (just not too long).

One thing I have noticed is that you tend to flip between present and past tense fairly regularly. I know that can be hard to catch, especially with the marathon writing sessions you described in your a/n, but I wanted you to be aware of it. For example:

"Hermione

oh my gosh...more SOON please!!!!!!!!!!

i really love your writing style. please please update soon

please please update soon i cant wait

please please update soon

please please update soon, i need my fix. must have more