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holy crap. thats it. holy crap. this is by far my mostest favoritest story of my angsty draco/hermione fixation. no, im not going to guess whats coming up and no i dont have any suggestions for the bloody best ontheedgeofmyseatifyoudonthurryupandwritefasteriwillexplode fic out there. ok, ok, i do have one request. STOP SECOND GUESSING YOUR WRITING TALENT. dont make excuses as to where your storyline is going or what your trying to do. let it flow. its perfect so far. if people are writing in about this stuff to you and its helping you, so be it. take it and run.just dont write what your doing. you owe us nothing. we owe it all to you. you are the one that is taking us to the edge and around all these to be dark but maybe better curves. that is what you as a writer (a spectacular one at that) is there to do. at the risk of sounding soooooo stooopid, but you are the "keymaster" to us. you are the one unlocking all these feelings and emotions from us. your not dragging us along, you are opening the door and believe me, we are running through it. everyone has their own thing when reading these fics. your story is my cup of tea. it has absolutely EVERYTHING i have always wanted. i started reading this site around 12/05. every day, and i mean EVERY FUCKING DAY, i look for The Uneventful Story. can you believe you cause this emotion by your writing? and its probably not just me either. this is the first time i have ever given a review or even thought about it (yeayea i know i bet i say this to all the writers) lol no, i mean it. i love angst, i love passion, i love mental anguish and mystery. i love flashbacks and smut. and i love plot and suprises. you have it all. now start moving those little digits and start pumping this story out so i can get the fuck out of my boring exsistance and go back into happiness by living vicariously through your story!

Well, I have to admit, this is the first time I've reviewed in the 11 chapters you've written, and I don't ever leave a review for this site, or any other site. And thinking how you, with your amazing writing, made me do that, makes me smile, simply because you do deserve all the reviews you get, and so many more. Everything in your writing is simply balanced, it's not that overly fluff that seems nice, but I hate, or the dark romance that few interpret Draco/Hermione as. And it's funny. Makes me laught out loud so my mom stares at me, wondering "what the heck??!!". So thanks for your hard work and dedication, and have fun writing the next chapters and so on, I'm looking forward to it!

*applauds* I did so enjoy that chapter. My only complaint - I feel left out in the cold from the dance. You had two chapters about it and it seems the only perk was the new shoes and some extra attention from Zabini. I would have loved to see more reaction from Malfoy as well as Harry. They were spitting fire at one another before just by looking at one another and they're suddenly borderline comatose in this chapter.

Oh, but how I did love that vision. It surprises me that it came what... six weeks after the dance?

The suspense though... I look forward to the next chapter to find out what happens next.

loved the story please update soon

You seriously need to update more often, I was so excited to see chapter eleven up. All of it was done wonderfully and I'm so excited for more. Update soon! I love the Draco and Hermione you write. Good job, keep going! Update!

THANY YOU FOR UPDATING!!!! I love this story!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Every time I see that you've updated I'm a little scared and hesitent to read the new chapter because I know that as soon as I'm done I'm going to be a crazy bundle of anticipation for days on end. I won't be able to stop thinking about your story every five minutes and wondering when you are going to write another mind-blowing chapter and relieve me of this torturous wait. I can only begin to tell you how amazing and dangerously addictive your writing is. You're such a good writer that if the seventh book finally came out I would rather continue reading your story (and trust me I am a huge Harry Potter fan/addict). Your work is on par with any great novel out there, so I certaily hope you intend to pursue writing as a career because you damn well found your niche. I think I would faint if I discovered that this was just your hobby and there was something you excelled at more than this. In a way I want you to finish the story as soon as possible (without damaging the plot line or the quality of course) so that I can move on before I go crazy from waiting, but at the same time I never want it to end because it has become like a drug to me. The way that you weave this cryptic web of mystery and use such tantalizing details opens so many possiblities for this story and always leaves me with such an intense want for more it almost borders on a physical need. Speaking of physical needs though, I really must go now because after every chapter of yours I read I snap out of my reverie to realize that my mouth is dry, my stomach's growling, my back aches like hell, my eyes are burning, and I need to pee so bad it hurts. So I bid you farewell and simply implore that you please, please update soon, because even though I want to sream at you with wild abandon to update before I die, I respect you far to much to resort to such measures and I realise that no ammount of my begging is suddenly going to open up your schedule with time to write one of your long and bloody fantastic chapters.

Boring? You have to be joking...the last thing this story is, is boring. This last chapter was amazing, finally giving us a hint of where you're going. I just didn't want it to end. And chapter 10...I had sweaty palms for the first half and butterflies in my stomach for the second. I loved it. You make me feel what Hermione is feeling. Great work. Thank you.

yay! *does the happy dance around her computer* thank you for the much anticipated update! you are a tease though - I was totally thinking that the smut included either Hermione and Blaise (yum) or real time Draco and Hermione (even yummier). But I'm not complaining - the smut was GREAT! All this time I thought Draco remembered their relationship (aha! now we at least know that something actually did go on between them!) but after his reaction to her question about his villa in Venic now I'm not too sure....

And THANK YOU for the explanation re: the Purge. Ah- this is beginnging to explain things. Although much is still mysterious. And I'm so glad Draco wasn't the one who Obliviated her...

Can't wait for more!! When is Blaise going to make a move!! Isn't Draco jealous? He's go to know they're seeing one another. And why was he acting so weird when Hermione confronted him about tattling to Alex???

More please! LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic. Drool.

this is one of my all-time favourites now! OMG! i love this story more each time. please update sooner. the wait kills me. amazing... seriously