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wow. i just read the entire story tonight, and cannot believe what i have been missing. this is one of the most tension-filled, heart-hammering, and toe-curling fan-fics I have ever read. It is going to kill me to have to wait for your update. I'm hoping that you will try to write some more while on vacation. I have to say, i wish there more stories out there with this kind of build-up and sexual tension. The last scene in the last chapter is phenomenal. You captured Hermione's vulnerability, and Draco's frustrated rage perfectly. I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to learning about what the hell has been going on. I can only hope you don't keep us in suspense for too long :)

Thanks for this awesome story... and please let me know if there are others around like this! They are rare gems among all the plotless crap I try so hard to avoid!

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Oh wow, how interesting! Please update as soon as you can! I love this story it is my favorite.

This has got to be my favorite HP fic of all time! PLease update soon!

AAARRRRGGGHHH it's so goood you're killing me I'm dying.....
Uhgh I'm soo hooked please oh please update soooooonnnnn!!!!!!

i'm truely bewitched. I MUST HAVE MORE. the story is just so amazing...

OH MY GOD, I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! It is well written, funny, and I am totally hooked. And don't worry about the smut, you are doing a great job. And I thought the whole flower obsession is hilarious. I can't wait for the next chapter, but I know I have! DAMN VACATIONS, DAMN THEM TO HELL! Excellent job, this is offically my favorite story on aff.net.

I understand now and I'm dying for the backstory. I was almost in tears for Draco, watching him torment himself with playing with Hermione.

The psuedo-smut was wonderful because it was pure emotional charge. I dig it and I can't wait to actually cry when you finally show us what happened.

How do you do it? The humor mixed with the raw feeling...

I'm going to go all English teacher on you and say your word choice is freakin' awesome. You nail the scene so perfectly. Thank you for being amazing... and for stringing me along.

first of all, thank you SO MUCH for updating. secondly, how could you just leave us hanging like that! You're going on vacation?! We have to wait till possibly next year for an update! aaaah! I wish I hadn't gotten addicted to this story because it is really going to suck between updates. But thank you at least for the little taste of smut. But can I ask one question: what the hell just happened? What was Draco doing! He obviously got caught up in a memory but then even when he's "normal" it seems like he has the hots for Hermione (he definitely gets jealous). Is he blind? Can't he see that they're perfect for each other?? And what's up with Harry? It's like he's into Hermione at times. You know - like more than just an overprotective friend. And what's up with Blaise?? Is he into Hermione or not? Sometimes he acts like it and sometimes not. I mean that necklace - wow. But why hasn't he made the move on her as yet? When you said to expect smut last chapter I thought that Blaise was finally going to make a move - guess not. And - wow- what a gift from Draco! God, he just gets the most thoughtful gifts doesn't he? Just wow. I thought his reaction to Hermione's reaction was quite intriguing. I wangt to say MORE PLEASE, but I know that's not going to happen. *sigh* sadness.

WAHOOO! I have been waiting for you to update:) *BIG HUGS* You rock! Iloved it..I shall resume patiently waiting for a next!

Great chapter, again. I adore this story and cannot wait for an update...I'm just too ipmatient! Thought the smut was a bit tame (for the NC-17 rating you gave the chapter), but maybe I just have a very dirty mind...guilty!