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DAMN PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE4 PLEASE PLEASE HAV DE NEXT CHAPPIE UP FAST BEFORE I GO SYCHO!!!!!!!

Oh my god i read the first chapter in colered grey fanfiction and i saw that u had it on here so i hurried and came here and i just love dis story sdo far i cried and laughed all in this chapter!

a chapter is a balm to the soul after tests ;-P

Yes, I'm glad you're finally at the meat of the story! I want to find out about the Purge and all that wartime stuff! Poor Draco, but great chapter(s)! :D

OMIGOD!!! your fic rocks! i just started reading it today, and i really can't take my eyes off of it. at the beginning i was really impressed with the wit of the conversations, and how easily the banter fell into place. i also love how everyone is just so accustomed to draco being there. their acceptance of him seemed unwilling but not farfetched; it played out very well. however, there were numerous typos, and wrong usage of words and grammar that made your story somewhat difficult to read, but aside from that the plot is brilliant. the story is incredibly unique and refreshing. i read some of your author's notes, and i do quite agree with you on a point you made. it was about writing fluffy and light d/hr stories, and that for this pairing it is better to make it darker. i think what you're doing with this is perfect. like temporary insanity it has an air of mystery and confusion. but also deviating from that other fabulous fic, your story has darker undertones that give your characters a depth and personality that makes them alive. albeit, sometimes it is hard to decipher the characters' thoughts, because of changes and surprising developments, it somehow gives your story a human aspect, because of the complications faced in real life. the last chapter you wrote was a real nail-biter though, and has kept me wanting more and more. so many questions are not yet answered. i think i feel like hermione in a jewelry store with all the sparkly stuff, both excited and utterly confused.XP all in all, i hope you update soon. this has got to be one of my all-time faves already.

Oh yay im so happy you updated!!!! I love this story sooooooo much please update again soon! Have a great christmas!

You must update, I am captivated by this story.

Good progression and use of humor, I laughed out loud literally, and thats rare. I love the fact that Draco and Hermione haven't thrown themselves at each other with the cliche 'she/he is so hot...' excuse.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh my God! What a bleeding story!
Your the best!
Thanks!

MORE! MORE DANGIT! ::Writhes. Whines.:: Pleaaaaaaaaase? Excellent writing. But I must have more or I'll go crazy!!

Oh my gosh, that whole thing about the cufflinks had me laughing soooo hard.
This story is awesome, I love the sarcastic view on life you gave Hermione.