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for The Uneventful Story

by SnowflakeImp

person Lady Lynn
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am mosr definaltely looking forward to these coming chapters you speak of that explain things because I am soooo incredibly beyond confused right now. But it was another great chapter, despite that. So Blaise? Who'd of thunk? yeah, that blond/blonde thing has always bugged me too. Just like when it gets talked about people being hung because clothes are hung, people are hanged. sure, its completely different and all but i think you should understand what im saying.
person PinkMartini
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that was really great! I love where your heading with this story. The crazy-ness with draco is really interesting..esp since im dyign to know whats going to happen! Keep it up!
person KatDiva
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Twenty five pages of greatness!

How can someone write so many pages and still leave so much intrigue and mystery! Only a master storyteller can do that!

Girl you just keep it flowing! I love it all!

I'm headed to your LJ now to fawn some more.

Hugs,

Kat
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fanfic.
I've been reading it since Chapter One and this is the first time I have ever reviewed a story.
Just wanted to support you and your writing.
I love the way you portray all of the characters and I'm currently working on a dramione fanfic too. x'D
(I lurke in your livejournal too. ;_;)
person Lrnd
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait...our lives aren't built around HP? omg!! Lovely chapter!!! I can't wait to see where it is all going to end up!
person J
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic, you need to update soon because I really can't take anymore waiting on the revelations. This has been the best story I've read in ages.
person S
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm slightly dissapointed with this chapter actually. i love this story and i really liked the way that you put across the characters but most of all the simplicity of the story. It had a simple plot with one mystery that i can't wait to find out (what doesn't she know?). This meant that you really concentrated on the characters and their relationships and so it was a really nice lovey fluffy story and i was just dying to see how draco and hermione would finally end up together. the mystery was a great twist and was the focal point of the story but now you made it really dark and added ANOTHER two twists: Blaise's problem (which i thought came out of the blue and was so sudden that i found it unrealistic) and draco's illness (which is a bit random). I know you haven't explained these yet but i think it takes away from the 'mystery' because you added so much other stuff in and the whole thing seems messed up like there's no longer a structure in the story. It sounds like one day you thought 'hey i'm gonna change the whole plot' and when i first read this chapter i actually thought someone else must have written it because it was so sudden. I dont mean to be rude but i'm really sad about the way this story turned out.
person crazyboy88
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice sex scene, although i think it was wrong... well um if i got it right, what people like blaise do is snuff sex (made that up) where they kill people during or at the climax... i dunno bout after, cuz ders no more sex after... unless of course blaise was screwing them again. anyways jst saying... i might b wrong :) but it's still a nice chap... :D tnx for my new years gift (d fic)
person mookie-chan
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! You are KILLING me with all these cliffhangers. I am literally on the edge of my seat wanting to know what's going to happen next and what memories will eventually surface.

But tormenting aside, I did love this chapter! I like seeing a more twisted and delightfully insane side to both Blaise and Draco *cackles maniacally*. And the the part with Hermione and the clobbering was pure genius XD

I'm so in love with this fic and I think you're doing a wonderful job. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person slytherinslave
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES PLEASE EXPLAIN!!! haha i love your story and i need some answers!!!! hehe wtf happened now?