rate_review Reviews

This chapter was absolutely perfect! I love the way you alternate humour and darkness. I was wondering: is Draco's evolution due to war circumstances or is it already because of the dark mark? I hope you enjoy yourself in Japan, but don't forget about your writer's duties. Since you come back on the 25th, I think we can reasonably count on an update - let's say, two days after your return?:)

I know you mentioned your worry about your smexy scenes in your livejournal, but it works here because it's not your focus. It's a diversion for the reader as much as for the characters from whatever it is they're trying to accomplish.

I have no idea if it's going to be in the next chapter, or if you gave a brief mention in the previous chapter, but I have no idea what broke Hermione. Are you holding us captive to that missing piece of information on purpose? I'm slightly confused because we are getting the story in pieces which is fine and good ride, but I feel like I'm missing something. Hermione went back in time to clear her confusion - and I'm going back in chapters - but I'm still unsure of what's happening and why it's happening. Help?

have a wonderful trip. please don't forget us poor people that are waiting for you to update your story.

I love this story oh so much...and it really was nice o see what they used to be.... and i had a feeling that hermione had slept with draco in the past despite this virgin belief she carried! have fun in japan.

that was phenomenal... i had goosebumps throughout the entire chapter. i can't believe how you created such tension and suspense in one chapter! i really hope you update again before you leave to japan! your story has gotten very addictive!

This chapter was really amazing! Please let them cure Draco, don't make him totally evil! And update quickly, but that goes without saying...

This is probably the most amusing fanfic I've read in some time. Good stuff.

please please please please hurry and continue!!
looking muchos forwards for the next couple of chapters!
(its getting even more interesting than i thought it would be)

keep up the good work!

Wow! Heavy emotions running rampant. I am simultaneously thrilled and frightened to finally find out what happened. I so hope Snape can cure Malfoy. I can't help but want them together in the end.

hmmmm, well i must say i'm surprised. now i'm going to tell you a story. (very dull, but true) i skipped over this story several times because i thought it would suck. i was reading another story and it said something about how well you wrote so i decided to read some of your work. low and behold, it was "thee story", so, chapter one completed, reading chapter two, and i must say i am..... very surprised. =]