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April 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I'm frustrated with where it ended.its cut off, not resolved. 2 more chapters would make it perfect
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story is brilliant (yes, I'll just pretend you're still around and reading this). I just finished reading it and to make it even better, it's not complete, that I already knew, but you didn't stop at an awkward time, or left the reader to rot with a major mystery that will never be solved. Basically it's just the ending missing, we can just assume they lived happily ever after, or not or whatever.
I understand that life happens, and the author often evolves and just can't go back to an old story. Frankly, I like it better this way, I hate to see a story I liked being butchered by a hasty ending (usually the fluffy wedding or such) because there has to be a "The End" line. No, there doesn't have to.
That being said, I would have like to read more by you (I'll read the other reviews and your LJ instead, as I don't feel like parting with the story just yet). Beautiful love story, I loved how rich their shades of grey were, how Draco was as dark as he could be without the reader starting to hate him or becoming estranged from him.
And Snape is the one that saves the day, as the hero he is and always should be, kudos for that ^^
Great story, thank you !
I understand that life happens, and the author often evolves and just can't go back to an old story. Frankly, I like it better this way, I hate to see a story I liked being butchered by a hasty ending (usually the fluffy wedding or such) because there has to be a "The End" line. No, there doesn't have to.
That being said, I would have like to read more by you (I'll read the other reviews and your LJ instead, as I don't feel like parting with the story just yet). Beautiful love story, I loved how rich their shades of grey were, how Draco was as dark as he could be without the reader starting to hate him or becoming estranged from him.
And Snape is the one that saves the day, as the hero he is and always should be, kudos for that ^^
Great story, thank you !
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Have you abandoned us?
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story! I'm wondering, though, if you're going to upload the last chapters...
I do love the idea of the backstory, though, and how Draco goes back and forth from being crazy and deluded to being sane and scared.
I do love the idea of the backstory, though, and how Draco goes back and forth from being crazy and deluded to being sane and scared.
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, For all that's holy on this planet will you update already? PLEASE?
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. i love how the story started out comedic and as things were slowly unraveled, the darkness came about! very interesting!
although i'm still dying to know blaise's part in draco's little scheme! what did he have to do with hermione that he needed her to remember? so he could take her from draco??
it tears at me how draco suffers. :( haha. he's always got it tough i guess.
wow. who would have guessed from the first chapter that all of that would lead to this ... slightly.. unstable draco!!
i actually remember reading this story from a whiles back, but then i forgot about it because there's no way to get notified if there's an update. anyways. i'm so glad i've rediscovered this!!!! so so so glad! but i hope you've got an update for us soon!!! i'm dying to know the rest of the story!!!! haha
although i'm still dying to know blaise's part in draco's little scheme! what did he have to do with hermione that he needed her to remember? so he could take her from draco??
it tears at me how draco suffers. :( haha. he's always got it tough i guess.
wow. who would have guessed from the first chapter that all of that would lead to this ... slightly.. unstable draco!!
i actually remember reading this story from a whiles back, but then i forgot about it because there's no way to get notified if there's an update. anyways. i'm so glad i've rediscovered this!!!! so so so glad! but i hope you've got an update for us soon!!! i'm dying to know the rest of the story!!!! haha
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's quite the pity that you've abandoned this.
Honestly, I loved it. And, I loved how dark it got, because the beginning was very eyebrow raising... such that I almost stopped reading it... I'm glad I didn't.
Oh well... I suppose this will have to be added to the WIP graveyard. *sighs woefully*
Honestly, I loved it. And, I loved how dark it got, because the beginning was very eyebrow raising... such that I almost stopped reading it... I'm glad I didn't.
Oh well... I suppose this will have to be added to the WIP graveyard. *sighs woefully*
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No update for 2008? Writer's block
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Back again to review. Sorry for the delay.
Here goes:
"Around three in the afternoon, Hermione used a Portkey to appear in a deserted alleyway in Muggle London, near Piccadilly Square. She also promptly appeared on a fresh mound of dog droppings.
Right upon impact she knew exactly what she had stepped in. The way her foot was squishing around and the stench was unmistakable.
she thought sourly.
Here goes:
"Around three in the afternoon, Hermione used a Portkey to appear in a deserted alleyway in Muggle London, near Piccadilly Square. She also promptly appeared on a fresh mound of dog droppings.
Right upon impact she knew exactly what she had stepped in. The way her foot was squishing around and the stench was unmistakable.
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why don't you update?????